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Array ( [sid] => 45583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Would Be Nice... [time] => 2004-04-30 11:37:56 [hometext] => Wrote it yesterday. still feel the same though.... [bodytext] => Who cares deeply for me?
Where is the point?
Friends mean nothing to me!
I feel so up uptight!
Where’s the strength in me?
To know I must go on?
Where’s the point inside me?
To tell me self-harm is wrong!
It’s all gone from me!
I don’t know where I am.
Nothing’s the same anymore.
Goods, becoming bad.
Feelings have turned bitter,
Emotions, weary, old.
If there’s a point just tell me!
Before I go completely cold!!
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 36 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Death Would Be Nice...

Contributed by deathdrop on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:37:56 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Who cares deeply for me?
Where is the point?
Friends mean nothing to me!
I feel so up uptight!
Where’s the strength in me?
To know I must go on?
Where’s the point inside me?
To tell me self-harm is wrong!
It’s all gone from me!
I don’t know where I am.
Nothing’s the same anymore.
Goods, becoming bad.
Feelings have turned bitter,
Emotions, weary, old.
If there’s a point just tell me!
Before I go completely cold!!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-04-30 11:37:56]
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Re: Death Would Be Nice... (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:05:44 PM AEST
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This is a really, really, good write! Great job!

Re: Death Would Be Nice... (User Rating: 1 )
by mickie on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:12:51 PM AEST
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you said you still feel the same way. i hear you. i understand you. life is very complex, and often feels like a nightmare. i just want to encourage you that there is a point to what you are feeling. i still struggle with such feelings. contact me and let me know how you are doing, okay? stay safe and believe you can succeed!

Re: Death Would Be Nice... (User Rating: 1 )
by Thivanka on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:24:18 PM AEST
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First of all, the poem is really good. It's short but, expressed a lot in those few words. Secondly, we all, I think, feel this way in any phase of life. I have been through hell, but if you just manage to keep the lid on, happiness is there. Beilive me.
-Thivanka

Re: Death Would Be Nice... (User Rating: 1 )
by Thivanka on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:25:53 PM AEST
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First of all, the poem is really good. It's short but, expressed a lot in those few words. Secondly, we all, I think, feel this way in any phase of life. I have been through hell, but if you just manage to keep the lid on, happiness is there. Beilive me.
-Thivanka

Re: Death Would Be Nice... (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:46:02 PM AEST
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God, i know exactly how you feel.... thank you for writing this.....now I know i'm not the only one who feels like this right now....great write

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