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Array ( [sid] => 45463 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternity's Nightmare [time] => 2004-04-29 19:12:12 [hometext] => Warming up a bit before I start writing at my best. Work wore me out mentally quite badly today. [bodytext] => Darkness lay waiting, in a graveyard's calm.
Fingers creep in gentle stillness to banshee's psalm.

Lovers hide, shaking, in frozen terror of what stalks.
Hunters come and go, in inky shadowed form, the undead that walks.

A game they played, has put them on death's train.
Invoked spirits, in chanted refrain, from a realm of eternal pain.

No circle, spell, or word can send invoked demon back to hell.
Only to pit will they return when all are left and empty shell.

Still they hide like frightened mice, while demons play.
She's told to run, his sacrifice, but the dead to not sway.

She hears his piercing screams, breathtakingly loud;
being torn to shreds by hating claws, while moon hides beind cloud.

Running 'til, lungs feel to explode, she finally hits her knees.
The price to hell is paid again, she knows she too will pay the fees.

Tears stream, while heart screams when she is cornered;
she begs and pleads, all hope surrendered.

Wicked grins filled with sharks teeth are all that greet.
She tries to fight, to get away, realizing she's just fresh meat.

She opens her eyes, thankful she's alive.
Sees her friends, all five.

She's so happy that she cries out ecstatic;
when she nears she knows that her eternity will not be copasetic.

Demons wait still grinning at her, wicked.
In the realm of hell, hope crushed, she dies again, tricked. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Black13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Eternity's Nightmare

Contributed by Black13 on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:12:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Darkness lay waiting, in a graveyard's calm.
Fingers creep in gentle stillness to banshee's psalm.

Lovers hide, shaking, in frozen terror of what stalks.
Hunters come and go, in inky shadowed form, the undead that walks.

A game they played, has put them on death's train.
Invoked spirits, in chanted refrain, from a realm of eternal pain.

No circle, spell, or word can send invoked demon back to hell.
Only to pit will they return when all are left and empty shell.

Still they hide like frightened mice, while demons play.
She's told to run, his sacrifice, but the dead to not sway.

She hears his piercing screams, breathtakingly loud;
being torn to shreds by hating claws, while moon hides beind cloud.

Running 'til, lungs feel to explode, she finally hits her knees.
The price to hell is paid again, she knows she too will pay the fees.

Tears stream, while heart screams when she is cornered;
she begs and pleads, all hope surrendered.

Wicked grins filled with sharks teeth are all that greet.
She tries to fight, to get away, realizing she's just fresh meat.

She opens her eyes, thankful she's alive.
Sees her friends, all five.

She's so happy that she cries out ecstatic;
when she nears she knows that her eternity will not be copasetic.

Demons wait still grinning at her, wicked.
In the realm of hell, hope crushed, she dies again, tricked.




Copyright © Black13 ... [ 2004-04-29 19:12:12]
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Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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wow, black...that is amazing. i cant wait to see your next one if that is warming up. that was brilliant. great images there.. i love the darkness. a great write. im definatly in awe...im going to read it again now.

*hugs* phil xxx


Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:21:55 PM AEST
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sh*t, wished I'd tought of this Black. This is impressive, truly amazing. I loved every minute of it!


Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:20:31 PM AEST
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Hello Black and welcome to YPDC.

I was impressed with your poem. I liked the rhyme scheme you used.

Really quite impressive.

Kie


Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:49:00 PM AEST
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What an awesome piece of dark poetry. I too am very much impressed. A tale written so well.


Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:56:25 PM AEST
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wow wow
thats wonderful Black
really enjoing
well done


Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:27:47 PM AEST
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This was gooood!! I like suprise endings! Very well written. If you're just warming up..... well dang!....Get on with it! I can't wait to read more!
Thumps ; 0 )


Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:30:08 PM AEST
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Oh and copasetic, you don't hear that too often. Love that word. K I'm done......
Thumps ; 0 )


Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:17:03 AM AEST
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gripping dark and spooky Im gonna have some nightmares for sure tonight........

Michelle


Re: Eternity's Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 07:01:50 PM AEST
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wow... by far one of my favorite writes by you.
a wonderful use of words.
chilling and dark.
very impressive write Black.
well done.
loved it.
Arden




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