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Array ( [sid] => 45462 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Were All Feeling It [time] => 2004-04-29 19:08:56 [hometext] => -------------------------------------- [bodytext] => Understanding my life
Is so difficult for you
You’ll never understand
The way I ache
The way I’ve been stricken,
Stricken from my heart
I’ve gained so much
Yet I’ve lost even more
Criticizing me is just hurting me more
You haven’t realized what you’ve done
What I’ve done
What we’ve all done to each other
Were so stuck in our pain
Our anger is taking our mind over
Breaking our skin
Breaking our hearts
Molding us into balls of clay
That are so fragile
And break with touch
Uncontrollable urges
That have been thought about
And used to ease the pain

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Were All Feeling It

Contributed by pyrofungus on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:08:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Understanding my life
Is so difficult for you
You’ll never understand
The way I ache
The way I’ve been stricken,
Stricken from my heart
I’ve gained so much
Yet I’ve lost even more
Criticizing me is just hurting me more
You haven’t realized what you’ve done
What I’ve done
What we’ve all done to each other
Were so stuck in our pain
Our anger is taking our mind over
Breaking our skin
Breaking our hearts
Molding us into balls of clay
That are so fragile
And break with touch
Uncontrollable urges
That have been thought about
And used to ease the pain

Copyright © pyrofungus ... [ 2004-04-29 19:08:56]
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Re: Were All Feeling It (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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This is good, I can relate too it. Well done

Re: Were All Feeling It (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:32:34 PM AEST
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a great write, i feel this way alot sometimes. there are some great images here. good write phil xxx

Re: Were All Feeling It (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:37:45 PM AEST
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Yeah... I totally agree... we've all felt it at some point in our lives and for some they are just experiencing it now... I just got off the phone with one of my friends who had had a tuff night and was thinking of suicide...
So... yeah we're all feeling it!
Thanks so much for ur write... it is really good... I'm sorry I have kinda overlooked your poems... maybe I should start reading them even if I don't think I would want to read it...
from what i've read so far from u... u have the "GIFT" Plz use it wisely... my friend...
keep up the great work...
~Donna~

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