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Array ( [sid] => 45440 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Written in Permanent Ink [time] => 2004-04-29 17:18:02 [hometext] => Goes along with the other poem (dont live in yesterday's) [bodytext] => I stare at the writing on my hand
Written in permanent ink
“Dan wants to die�
Is what it says
Written in all capital letters
I run my finger across the words
Trying to think of a way to make you want to live
“Dan wants to die�
You whisper to me as I hold you in my arms
I don’t give you reasons to live
Or tell you that it is wrong
“Dan wants to die�
Written on my hand all in capital letters
In permanent ink
I keep it on for one short day
Then gently rub it off
For no one else needs to know
That
“Dan wants to die�

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lil_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Written in Permanent Ink

Contributed by lil_angel on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I stare at the writing on my hand
Written in permanent ink
“Dan wants to die�
Is what it says
Written in all capital letters
I run my finger across the words
Trying to think of a way to make you want to live
“Dan wants to die�
You whisper to me as I hold you in my arms
I don’t give you reasons to live
Or tell you that it is wrong
“Dan wants to die�
Written on my hand all in capital letters
In permanent ink
I keep it on for one short day
Then gently rub it off
For no one else needs to know
That
“Dan wants to die�





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Re: Written in Permanent Ink (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:41:08 PM AEST
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this really touched me.... stay strong hun,
and hope and pray that he does choose life.

*hugs*


Re: Written in Permanent Ink (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:45:21 PM AEST
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Dont let him go, dont let him die, he is loved, dont let him go, ever, dont leave him, hje needs you, your helping gideing hand, he needs your love.
tweeky,
good poem, it touched me


Re: Written in Permanent Ink (User Rating: 1 )
by bj on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:49:00 PM AEST
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now write on his hand that you want him to live..well done...


Re: Written in Permanent Ink (User Rating: 1 )
by Juliet on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 02:20:43 PM AEST
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How very sad! I'm sure others would want to know,even if they didn't need to. Very real and very good.




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