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Array ( [sid] => 45299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When You're In Sight [time] => 2004-04-28 19:31:58 [hometext] => feeling those butterflies [bodytext] => This Is Going Wrong
But Feeling So Right
Don't Notice Anyone Else
When You're In Sight
From Day One
Up Till Now
I Should've Made
A Countdown
Of How Fast I Happened To Fall

I Hit The Floor
As I See You Walk
Through That Door
I Can Have It All
But I Still Want More
My Life Was Perfect
So You Came As A Challenge
Now I Have A Crush On You
That I Can't Manage

I Had No Doubt
You Will Come Up Here
But You Turned Around
Making It More Intriguing
I Wanna Know What You're About
Never Before Feared Or Cared
Knew The Answer Would Be Yes
But The Way You Smile
When I Get Closer Puts Me Under Stress [comments] => 5 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 33 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

When You're In Sight

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:31:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

This Is Going Wrong
But Feeling So Right
Don't Notice Anyone Else
When You're In Sight
From Day One
Up Till Now
I Should've Made
A Countdown
Of How Fast I Happened To Fall

I Hit The Floor
As I See You Walk
Through That Door
I Can Have It All
But I Still Want More
My Life Was Perfect
So You Came As A Challenge
Now I Have A Crush On You
That I Can't Manage

I Had No Doubt
You Will Come Up Here
But You Turned Around
Making It More Intriguing
I Wanna Know What You're About
Never Before Feared Or Cared
Knew The Answer Would Be Yes
But The Way You Smile
When I Get Closer Puts Me Under Stress

Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2004-04-28 19:31:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When You're In Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:36:58 PM AEST
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Good Poem.

~Brittany~

Re: When You're In Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:48:18 PM AEST
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very cute poem.
written very well. i like this.
well done keep up the awesome work.
Arden

Re: When You're In Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:10:41 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I feel like a secret today.

Re: When You're In Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:13:16 PM AEST
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Cute poetry,I hope you get your crush,but for the time being,don't forget that there's nothing like the feeling of butterflies in your stomach! I love that feeling!:D
PumpkinPie

Re: When You're In Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:19:17 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good I Like It Alot !!!!!
Written So Well......Keep Em Coming :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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