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Swim free little one
Oh NO! NETS
Swim faster, faster,
The nets are closer
Swim faster!
The nets catch you
They separate you from your family
You cry for your mommy, she whimpers her last I love you
Fight for your freedom!
All is going black
Your all tied up you cant fight it anymore
You feel
Like you are dying

Finally you wake up,
You are in a strange place
With strange creatures that walk on two legs
Pounding on the force field around you
The noise is unbearable

They throw fish into your tank
You don’t want to be fed you want to catch your food

Ohh poor dolphin, keep your mind on freedom
I promise you
You will get your freedom!
February 07th 2000
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The dolphin

Contributed by lil_angel on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The dolphin swims free
Swim free little one
Oh NO! NETS
Swim faster, faster,
The nets are closer
Swim faster!
The nets catch you
They separate you from your family
You cry for your mommy, she whimpers her last I love you
Fight for your freedom!
All is going black
Your all tied up you cant fight it anymore
You feel
Like you are dying

Finally you wake up,
You are in a strange place
With strange creatures that walk on two legs
Pounding on the force field around you
The noise is unbearable

They throw fish into your tank
You don’t want to be fed you want to catch your food

Ohh poor dolphin, keep your mind on freedom
I promise you
You will get your freedom!
February 07th 2000

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Re: The dolphin (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:23:28 PM AEST
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This is very good, creative.
Nice job.

Re: The dolphin (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:29:17 PM AEST
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very enjoying reading
well done...

Re: The dolphin (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:39:40 PM AEST
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such a unique poem
great job

Re: The dolphin (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:22:07 PM AEST
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Good poem.

~Brittany~

Re: The dolphin (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:41:02 PM AEST
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Very Creative Write.... I Enjoyed It !!!!!!
Thanks For Sharing :-) Keep Em Coming
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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