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Array ( [sid] => 4521 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank you [time] => 2002-10-01 15:50:00 [hometext] => I'm sorry that it hurts you when i'm deppressed, I try to stay strong. [bodytext] => Thank you Linny you saved my life
You told me that you cared
If it wasn’t for you that very night
I would have carried out the suicide I had prepared
I had taken a yellow jacket to pep me up as I hung out with my friends
But it only brought me closer to my almost end
I got sadder and sadder,
My friends made me madder and madder
I wrote my suicide note all-nice and neat
Then I got out the p.p.a.
I had just enough left
To make me pass away
But it was you that made me think
About the people I would hurt
I put the pills back in the bottle
And pretended like it never occurred
I thank you linny, ill think next time before I try it again
I thank you linny, you saved my life
I’m glad you’re my friend
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 375 [topic] => 37 [informant] => notbagheadx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )

Thank you

Contributed by notbagheadx on Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 03:50:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

Thank you Linny you saved my life
You told me that you cared
If it wasn’t for you that very night
I would have carried out the suicide I had prepared
I had taken a yellow jacket to pep me up as I hung out with my friends
But it only brought me closer to my almost end
I got sadder and sadder,
My friends made me madder and madder
I wrote my suicide note all-nice and neat
Then I got out the p.p.a.
I had just enough left
To make me pass away
But it was you that made me think
About the people I would hurt
I put the pills back in the bottle
And pretended like it never occurred
I thank you linny, ill think next time before I try it again
I thank you linny, you saved my life
I’m glad you’re my friend

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Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 07:20:46 PM AEST
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Thank God for the Linnys in this world!!!
Very fine tribute 2 your friend!!!!
I'm sure this write will make lots of folks think twice.....
God bless you and Linny!
PEACE, LUV, FRIENDS,
emy

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 06:07:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. You're lucky to have a friend like Linny. :)

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by ATTICUSKRAZEZ on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:09:17 AM AEST
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Good Choice...I'm working on two poems for my boys that didn't have a Linny around...

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