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Array ( [sid] => 45206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where Creatures Lie [time] => 2004-04-28 09:16:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Times have changed but still be play the same old game
I find comfort in being alone
Crying at night and wishing for the unknown.
You’re never good enough unless you’re already mine.
I want what I cannot have
And hate what’s already in my possession.
I despise your fate,
I envy you, for you never look back in time.
On what you didn’t receive for free.
Not a thing was handed to you,
It’s all legit and I can’t handle that.
‘Cause I wasn’t able to have anything on my own.
Always kept on a leash
That shortens day by day.
I’m giving up and they’re growing stronger,
Until one day
My life as we know it, will not exist.
The frozen moments, captured in time,
Cannot be held a lie.
For I have proof and recognize this place.
Your laugh still makes me do crazy things,
Going into a world of unknown possibilities.
Where you’re always there for me.
The sun never rises where I live.
Always lonesome and mystifying
A nightmare I yearn for.
‘Cause reassuringly, It’ll never leave me
Or play me like some f u c k I n g game.
I know what to expect in my world where creatures lie.
Come join me now,
Hold my hand until it disintegrates,
If ever your love should last that long.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Fairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Where Creatures Lie

Contributed by Fairy on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:16:29 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Times have changed but still be play the same old game
I find comfort in being alone
Crying at night and wishing for the unknown.
You’re never good enough unless you’re already mine.
I want what I cannot have
And hate what’s already in my possession.
I despise your fate,
I envy you, for you never look back in time.
On what you didn’t receive for free.
Not a thing was handed to you,
It’s all legit and I can’t handle that.
‘Cause I wasn’t able to have anything on my own.
Always kept on a leash
That shortens day by day.
I’m giving up and they’re growing stronger,
Until one day
My life as we know it, will not exist.
The frozen moments, captured in time,
Cannot be held a lie.
For I have proof and recognize this place.
Your laugh still makes me do crazy things,
Going into a world of unknown possibilities.
Where you’re always there for me.
The sun never rises where I live.
Always lonesome and mystifying
A nightmare I yearn for.
‘Cause reassuringly, It’ll never leave me
Or play me like some f u c k I n g game.
I know what to expect in my world where creatures lie.
Come join me now,
Hold my hand until it disintegrates,
If ever your love should last that long.




Copyright © Fairy ... [ 2004-04-28 09:16:29]
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Re: Where Creatures Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:11:00 PM AEST
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this was just so sad..
so filled with hoplessness and dark emotion.
you wrote this well.
nicely done.
keep it up.
Arden




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