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Array ( [sid] => 44985 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little Red Robin [time] => 2004-04-26 21:52:27 [hometext] => yeah so i like sunny days... they make me feel good :) :) :) im excited for spring and summer [bodytext] => I saw a little robin fly high against the sky
it soared above the mountains and touch the clouds up high

It brought songs of splendid memories and springtime melodies
It took away our sorrows and reminded me of thee

Its wings had set a flutter like a beating heart
It danced around so freely that I hope we'd never part

The trees are filled with flowers that allow the bird to nest
And bring about the little ones to sing with all the rest

The little ones keep chirpin until spring is in full bloom
Leaving all the winter days behind with all the gloom....

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Little Red Robin

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:52:27 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

I saw a little robin fly high against the sky
it soared above the mountains and touch the clouds up high

It brought songs of splendid memories and springtime melodies
It took away our sorrows and reminded me of thee

Its wings had set a flutter like a beating heart
It danced around so freely that I hope we'd never part

The trees are filled with flowers that allow the bird to nest
And bring about the little ones to sing with all the rest

The little ones keep chirpin until spring is in full bloom
Leaving all the winter days behind with all the gloom....

Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-04-26 21:52:27]
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Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:09:51 PM AEST
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Excellent write! Wonderfully done!~

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST
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awww this was so beautiful.
the imagery was amazing. just lovely.
well done keep it up.
Arden

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:44:14 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, Jenn. I love sunshiny anything. Happy happy is my motto. Arden just made me write a dark poem, can you believe that???? Give me a chirping robin over a death scythe anytime. This really is so delightful. Lady after my own heart.

Hugs.
Rita

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:59:28 PM AEST
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Beautifull write.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:58:25 PM AEST
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very pretty jenny, i love this line,"Its wings had set a flutter like a beating heart"...so charming:) hugs n' love, nessa

@->>->-

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:17:46 AM AEST
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very beautiful..quite refreshing..venkat

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:01:35 AM AEST
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Just for words like that....is why I come in to read. Beautiful!!!!

Thank you so very much.

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:27:16 AM AEST
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PRETTY POEM JENNY! I COULD SEE WHAT I WAS READING & ABLE TO TAKE IN FULL VIEW!! GREAT ONE!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:28:18 AM AEST
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Wonderful and sweet...
I love robins, it's such a shame they only stay in the Netherlands during winter and fly to Russia as soon as spring begins...
Greetz,
Hur

Re: Little Red Robin (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:29:06 AM AEST
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If there is anything more beautiful to write about than nature I do NOT want to know. Every spring I wait eagerly to see a robins fat breast. Because I know when I see a little chubby robin that spring time and babies are right around the corner. What a wondrous poem you have written.

Kie

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