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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => goodbye
[time] => 2004-04-25 16:53:56
[hometext] => you know, i feel like this alot..i really have had enough of life..yeah, i laugh, i joke, but its just my way of hiding...but im sick of hiding now...goodbye
[bodytext] => i cant take this,
screaming for help,
im crying out...
what is the point of living in a world that doesnt understand you?
i dont know.
tear my heart into pieces,
make it all better,
internal bleeding
infinate heartbreak,
i tried to find a reason to live,
all i found was a will to die,
i tried to hide this,
keep it all inside,
but some of you realized,
saw through the disguise,
im sorry for giving up..
i thought i was strong.
goodbye everyone...
i was wrong...
[comments] => 16
[counter] => 330
[topic] => 36
[informant] => lostinmyself
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
goodbye
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i cant take this,
screaming for help,
im crying out...
what is the point of living in a world that doesnt understand you?
i dont know.
tear my heart into pieces,
make it all better,
internal bleeding
infinate heartbreak,
i tried to find a reason to live,
all i found was a will to die,
i tried to hide this,
keep it all inside,
but some of you realized,
saw through the disguise,
im sorry for giving up..
i thought i was strong.
goodbye everyone...
i was wrong...
Copyright ©
lostinmyself
... [
2004-04-25 16:53:56]
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Re: goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:57:25 PM AEST
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You know, I feel like this everyday, but i hold on somehow from the deep will inside me to go on. Cheesy as it sounds, theres always something to live for, so find a reason and don't give up
Love Sam |
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Re: goodbye
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:59:47 PM AEST
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*hugs*
Oh, hon, you're not alone . . . please PM me, email me (bookworm92389@yahoo.com), YIM me, MSNM me, whatever, whenever / if ever you need to talk. I'm not just saying that; I really mean it. Please do.
--Nora |
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Re: goodbye
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:05:13 PM AEST
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| only two words: hold on |
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Re: goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:05:55 PM AEST
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| No matter how bad the time seems,if you just wait a better day will come. You may not be happy right now but you will be down the line. There is nothing worth giving up life for. Do you realize how important you are to some people in life? We all have a reason for being placed here. Are you going to run out on your reason before you get to achieve it. That is just cheating someone else down the line. Hang in there and life will improve in time. |
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Re: goodbye
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:21:21 PM AEST
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| that was a wonderful poem... but please don't The last few lines really touched me. I have a fairly good idea of how you're feeling. Just please don't, okay? I know it seems like the only option, but there IS another one. Just hang on one more day. Keep saying that to yourself and don't think about the future. I've read some of your poems, and it would be awful to put a talent like yours 6 feet under. Please, just hold on. You can pm me if you'd like to talk, EVER! Good poem, by the way... |
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Re: goodbye
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by God-Hates-Me on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:47:59 PM AEST
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| This was a very nice write, it's very moving and full of emotion, I know how you feel, and I know it's not going to change the way you feel about anything but really, dont do anything stupid, if you can write like this you do have a meaning in life, I'm sure you can touch this whole generation, and maybe more. Please dont give up just yet. . keep writing. |
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Re: goodbye
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:21:16 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem i'm also sick of hiding aswell.. nicely put
Enjoyed it a lot:)
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: goodbye
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:53:34 PM AEST
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Lost, good writing, scary thoughts. Talk to me, girl.
Stitch |
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Re: goodbye
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:26:38 PM AEST
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| hey, we're all here for ya... WE understand you. hang in there... it'll get better |
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Re: goodbye
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by arden on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:45:39 PM AEST
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sometimes you have to go through the bad until you get to the good. i know it sounds stupid and corny but its true.
the good in life takes awhile to get here but we gotta be strong and wait for it. yea im rambling lol ill shut up now.
nicely written.
Arden |
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Re: goodbye
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by silent on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:02:36 PM AEST
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Some suicidal poetry is very well written and touches you. But some of it scares you and this is one such poem in my mind. Either you wrote something with such simplicity that was one of the strongest and seemingly genuine ones i have ever read. Or you are serious, if you are that is very sad as you have been a good friend to me, and i can then have 3 good friends of mine victims of this sh*t. Everythings f*****d ok, but it's not the answer.
Silent |
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Re: goodbye
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:34:43 PM AEST
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Although you sound really hurt right now,do know there is always a solution and that the pain you are dealing with right now is only temporary.People care and love you,and their world would shatter without you in it.If you need to talk,I'm here for you.
PumpkinPie |
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Re: goodbye
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:02:03 PM AEST
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There are people on this site who are listening even when you think no one else is.
Reach out to them as they reach out to you.
You have alot of talent and so many of us like you. We really do. I want you to like yourself too.
When you need to talk, i'm here.
Don't forget, okay?
Kie |
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Re: goodbye
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:58:09 AM AEST
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Don't give up, Phil! There are folks who understand you... Don't you think one true friend is worth infinitely more than a whole bunch op crappy b******* who don't give a f***?
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:55:56 PM AEST
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| Wow. |
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Re: goodbye
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by CaddishCut on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 08:26:46 PM AEST
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| Excellent way of putting it. Many can relate, I'm sure. |
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