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Array ( [sid] => 44749 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sinister As You Were [time] => 2004-04-25 13:53:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sinister victims
The battle's never won

Bite the bullet
Clip the gun

Arching curling anything
The spirit's dead within

Glass cut heart out
Broken sharding begin

Tripping, falling
Hold the gate

Losing and wishing
Life's beholder, filled with hate

Fuel from the lighter
Tear up my blue eyes

Suck in the poison
Alone my spirit cries

Sinister wishes
Killing spirit let be

Bite the bullet
Come fight with me

Despair creates sorrow
Curling fingers wrap the throat

Blood spills onto anything
Grasping note to beautiful note

Sad song willingly
Singing all alone

The hateful acts are deepening
The times I love to condone

Really wishing always
Clip my wings and die

I'm crying out for anything
As this fuel irritates my eye

Wishing always for darkness
The smiles on your face

I wish to rip your eyes out
The poison with which you lace

Stuck in the rut of emptiness
Conquering words let be

I'm trying to get through in time
And you're only killing me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Exodus-On-Life [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Sinister As You Were

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:53:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sinister victims
The battle's never won

Bite the bullet
Clip the gun

Arching curling anything
The spirit's dead within

Glass cut heart out
Broken sharding begin

Tripping, falling
Hold the gate

Losing and wishing
Life's beholder, filled with hate

Fuel from the lighter
Tear up my blue eyes

Suck in the poison
Alone my spirit cries

Sinister wishes
Killing spirit let be

Bite the bullet
Come fight with me

Despair creates sorrow
Curling fingers wrap the throat

Blood spills onto anything
Grasping note to beautiful note

Sad song willingly
Singing all alone

The hateful acts are deepening
The times I love to condone

Really wishing always
Clip my wings and die

I'm crying out for anything
As this fuel irritates my eye

Wishing always for darkness
The smiles on your face

I wish to rip your eyes out
The poison with which you lace

Stuck in the rut of emptiness
Conquering words let be

I'm trying to get through in time
And you're only killing me

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2004-04-25 13:53:29]
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Re: Sinister As You Were (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:29:27 PM AEST
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a little help...not quite sure where you're taking this. is it a love or anger type? just didn't find/see the markers after the third read. am interested to find out which of the phrases is the key.
thanks.

Re: Sinister As You Were (User Rating: 1 )
by dead_beauty on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:00:58 PM AEST
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Very powerful piece, though I'm not sure what it's about. Maybe a clue? :)~ravenghost

Re: Sinister As You Were (User Rating: 1 )
by tamilyn on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:24:31 AM AEST
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Someone angered or hurt you, yes? Like you, I write when I am in pain. Well done!

tamilyn

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