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Array ( [sid] => 44727 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Time [time] => 2004-04-25 10:04:46 [hometext] => **I just feel like I'm not being noticed and someday they'll all wish they didn't waste the time it would've taken to know me** [bodytext] => A dream phase hazy mist enclosing
All the edges and I’m burning
Striving just to make some noise
Keep that faux smile and some poise

Oh through the world my mind is wand’ring
Butterfly trapped in a crystal ball
Ever seeking soothing solace
Only found in drops of melting rain
Searching for someone to hold me
Anyone to grasp me without pain
Someone who won’t be as cold as
All the painful lyrics that I scrawl
Lyrics that are only squand’ring

Time

Smile upon my face forever
Do they know me? Sadly, never
I yearn to let someone in
Make them see the me underneath my skin

Oh in the darkness I go wand’ring
Gazing through the cage of my crystal ball
Finding temporary solace
As they bid me to come in from the rain
Hoping someone now will hold me
Anyone can grasp me without pain
He is the only one as bold as
The lyrics without mercy I shall scrawl
As they join with me and we’re squand’ring

Time
Woah oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
Time

Butterfly I’m changing, morphing
Failed attempts I’m slowly fixing
Someday you shall here my sweet song
And in your broken heart I will then belong

Someday I will get a new start
You’ll be yearning to know what’s in my heart
Someday in time I’ll be singing
In your ears my voice is ringing

I’ll be the siren coaxing you in
You’ll want to see under my skin
I will fin’lly be in my perfect prime
And you will only long to go back in

Time [comments] => 7 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 34 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Time

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:04:46 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



A dream phase hazy mist enclosing
All the edges and I’m burning
Striving just to make some noise
Keep that faux smile and some poise

Oh through the world my mind is wand’ring
Butterfly trapped in a crystal ball
Ever seeking soothing solace
Only found in drops of melting rain
Searching for someone to hold me
Anyone to grasp me without pain
Someone who won’t be as cold as
All the painful lyrics that I scrawl
Lyrics that are only squand’ring

Time

Smile upon my face forever
Do they know me? Sadly, never
I yearn to let someone in
Make them see the me underneath my skin

Oh in the darkness I go wand’ring
Gazing through the cage of my crystal ball
Finding temporary solace
As they bid me to come in from the rain
Hoping someone now will hold me
Anyone can grasp me without pain
He is the only one as bold as
The lyrics without mercy I shall scrawl
As they join with me and we’re squand’ring

Time
Woah oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
Time

Butterfly I’m changing, morphing
Failed attempts I’m slowly fixing
Someday you shall here my sweet song
And in your broken heart I will then belong

Someday I will get a new start
You’ll be yearning to know what’s in my heart
Someday in time I’ll be singing
In your ears my voice is ringing

I’ll be the siren coaxing you in
You’ll want to see under my skin
I will fin’lly be in my perfect prime
And you will only long to go back in

Time




Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2004-04-25 10:04:46]
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Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by lifefliesby on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:43:12 AM AEST
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I'm sorry...
I 'll always love you Chelsea
...
You put "here" when it should be "hear"...
"you shall here my sweet song"
I still want to be friends... heh, I never thought I'd have to stay "still"... and I'm not sure if I have to but you are honestly one of my best/closest friends and I wlove you.
I'll talk to later, alright?
And the song...
I love it... "great write"
Love ALWAYS,
Jared


Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:59:05 AM AEST
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These are touching lyrics - the spelling errors are forgivable due to the extent of its resonance, and the depth of its meaning.
Well done.


Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by ChrisvanOostrom on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:27:25 PM AEST
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Well, you're certainly not squandering time writing lyrics like this one.

Chris


Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:34:46 AM AEST
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No my dear you are quite right no-one really knows youand you have expressed it beautifully with this poem.

bernard.


Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:16:09 PM AEST
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I would just love to hear you sing these beautiful words. Don't worry. The people who are worthwhile will notice you. Remember He has plans for you...good plans.
Stitch


Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 04:16:43 PM AEST
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Very graceful style of writing you had here in this poem. I love the repetition of the title throughout the poem. I especially liked the second stanza....good metaphor and alliteration and imagery. I loved the simple phrase "melting rain." That was absolutely gorgeous. Keep up the awesome work!
~Carrie~


Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:53:12 PM AEST
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Beautiful and lyrical. Also sad. I hope the best for you.
Andrew




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