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In My Fantasy
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:56:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In my fantasy
there's nothing stopping
me from loving you
In my fantasy
nobody cares for what
we do
And no one judges
every step I take
In my fantasy
we're free from boundaries
of this world
In my fantasy
no one pays attention
if you I hold
And no one evaluates
every mistake I make
In my fantasy
I can tell you what I think
without a worry
In my fantasy
I choose you over them all
and I'm not sorry
Cause no one knows
a promise I'm about to break
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2004-04-24 20:56:55]
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Re: In My Fantasy
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by eviegirl on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:59:25 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. If only others wouldn't place restrictions on us, even if we can break them, its hard. |
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Re: In My Fantasy
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by Kie on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 09:37:08 PM AEST
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Your poem was just perfect for my mood.
Fantasy is better than reality isn't it sometimes?
Enjoyed this one so much.
Kie |
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Re: In My Fantasy
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 09:44:52 PM AEST
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omg I feel exactly like you I have a fantasy of these things too
thank you for writing this :)
This is just wow.. awesome job
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: In My Fantasy
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:11:16 AM AEST
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a good poem sometimes i to wish there was no one judging my every step and always evaluating me.
Bobo (Joel) |
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