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Array ( [sid] => 44554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No one knows [time] => 2004-04-24 01:38:19 [hometext] => I wrote this on Feb. 7, 2004. I'm no poet or writer, I usually don't like to write. Please comment! [bodytext] => She layes in her bed as she
thinks of all the pain in her life
All he times that
she could of done better
All the times that
she's hurt so many people
And what nobody realizes
is that she hurting so bad right now
She's been screaming
inside for SO long,
but nobody's ever heard it
She hears everbody
else's problems and
feels bad for feeling sorry for herself
because she knows how lucky she is
But she has still been screaming
inside for so long and still
nobody even hears her
She hides all of the pain inside
no one knows how it hurts her
And sometimes she wonders
why she was even born
When she finally gets her chance
it might be too late,
she might be gone by then
Because she's been screaming
inside for SOOO long and
nobody will ever hear it,
till it's too late
She just wants to drift
away to that imaginarey place
where it will all be okay.
It will all be just great. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 61 [informant] => sweetdevilgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
No one knows

Contributed by sweetdevilgirl on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:38:19 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



She layes in her bed as she
thinks of all the pain in her life
All he times that
she could of done better
All the times that
she's hurt so many people
And what nobody realizes
is that she hurting so bad right now
She's been screaming
inside for SO long,
but nobody's ever heard it
She hears everbody
else's problems and
feels bad for feeling sorry for herself
because she knows how lucky she is
But she has still been screaming
inside for so long and still
nobody even hears her
She hides all of the pain inside
no one knows how it hurts her
And sometimes she wonders
why she was even born
When she finally gets her chance
it might be too late,
she might be gone by then
Because she's been screaming
inside for SOOO long and
nobody will ever hear it,
till it's too late
She just wants to drift
away to that imaginarey place
where it will all be okay.
It will all be just great.




Copyright © sweetdevilgirl ... [ 2004-04-24 01:38:19]
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Re: No one knows (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:48:03 AM AEST
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You have a great talent! I think you should keep this going!


Re: No one knows (User Rating: 1 )
by bluoreo on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:08:33 AM AEST
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This is an awesome write. I'm sorry if this is how you feel. I have felt the same before and now I am better. But i hope you get through this.


Re: No one knows (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:21:00 AM AEST
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Your words tell us of where we all have been, I like this much. Thank you and please write more.


Re: No one knows (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:59:21 PM AEST
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I'm sorry you feel this way. My advice to you is to keep writing because it can really heal a person. You can also contact me if you'd like, I'm always up for a listen.
Bravo and encore,
Love,
Chelsea




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