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Array ( [sid] => 44493 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Ain't What I Want [time] => 2004-04-23 17:54:29 [hometext] => love is so confusing, especially when you let others be the judge of how it should be [bodytext] => Things are not working out
the way they should be
I can surely see
myself without you
But it ain't what I want

How can I be sure if I will get
another chance
That we will dance
at a better time
This will be disastrous

I know that I have not said
what I meant
Don't want to hear you spent
your love on another
I should be the one

You seem to like me better
when I'm this way
But today
I just might leave
Watch me get up and go

Here comes my pride again
getting in between
I want you to lean
on right now
I'm too scared to admit

It's probably my fault you never
told what I know
I feel so low
When I'm alone
I honestly want you back [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 55 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

It Ain't What I Want

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:54:29 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Things are not working out
the way they should be
I can surely see
myself without you
But it ain't what I want

How can I be sure if I will get
another chance
That we will dance
at a better time
This will be disastrous

I know that I have not said
what I meant
Don't want to hear you spent
your love on another
I should be the one

You seem to like me better
when I'm this way
But today
I just might leave
Watch me get up and go

Here comes my pride again
getting in between
I want you to lean
on right now
I'm too scared to admit

It's probably my fault you never
told what I know
I feel so low
When I'm alone
I honestly want you back

Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2004-04-23 17:54:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: It Ain't What I Want (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:59:41 PM AEST
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Ain't it true.....good write....
Jenni

Re: It Ain't What I Want (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:06:53 PM AEST
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God bless you. Tell him what you know. try to break down the walls that are hold things back. Communication come before trust. But remember patients is a virtue, don't push or rush. If things are ment to be, things well happen. Peace, love, and hope to you.

Re: It Ain't What I Want (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:42:45 PM AEST
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Well your poem did a great job expressing your emotions and how you feel. It was also well constructed and it flowed in a pleasant way. I hope things get easier for you and that it all works out. Enjoyed reading this one.

Kie

Re: It Ain't What I Want (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:37:02 PM AEST
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A good write... very well expressed... thoughts and emotions are hard sometimes to put down on paper and u did a good job here with this...
~Donna~

Re: It Ain't What I Want (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:49:39 AM AEST
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beautiful poem I liked how certain words were in italics really added to the poem as a whole.

Bobo (Joel)

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