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into my unending emptyness.
My eyes of the darkest blue,
bleed with the tears of desire.
Love is something of the utmoset treasure,
only found in the deepest seas.
The turnips in the sandy halls
clutter my innocent decadence.
With there words I swear to you,
I'd live a thousand years just to make u love me.
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My deadly desire

Contributed by Kirby on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:28:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A soft breeze whispers obscebites,
into my unending emptyness.
My eyes of the darkest blue,
bleed with the tears of desire.
Love is something of the utmoset treasure,
only found in the deepest seas.
The turnips in the sandy halls
clutter my innocent decadence.
With there words I swear to you,
I'd live a thousand years just to make u love me.

Copyright © Kirby ... [ 2004-04-23 16:28:37]
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Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:33:15 PM AEST
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Well done, i enjoyed it very much.

Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:41:12 PM AEST
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well done,great

Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:01:27 PM AEST
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clutter my innocent decadence........brilliant !!!!

Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_chick666pk on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:35:48 PM AEST
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My eyes of the darkest blue,
bleed with the tears of desire.

I loved that part it made me think there was more to this poem then there really was.
nice write
-Victoria-

Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:42:27 PM AEST
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brooding thoughts make some lovely emotional jargon sometimes, otherwise known as poetry... i like this! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:44:08 AM AEST
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"I'd live a thousand years just to make u love me" That line alone left me in an emotional state.

Spellbinding
Roses
Larry

Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:10:33 PM AEST
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this was just pure awesome!
wow this was great. i loved it.
so well written and great use of words.
well done.
Arden

Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:12:07 PM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: My deadly desire (User Rating: 1 )
by pinkunicornoctober on Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 06:10:56 AM AEST
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I love this! I've felt just like this before...Great Job!

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