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Array ( [sid] => 4361 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love [time] => 2002-09-28 07:50:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => feeling so cold, alone in my sorrow,
heart aching, mind wishing to borrow,
a piece of warm love, a piece of you,
but everyday i wake up feeling blue.

denied of this sense, a wonderful savior,
i try everyday, to find you -- my behavior,
why am i so sad and burried in pain,
troublesome days, all are passing in vain.

my mind's eye is closed to the light,
when its dark, it can open at night,
scream out a word, but nothing to say,
here safe in abyss, in my bed i shall lay.

dozing off through the void, into myself,
feelings are stored, very far on a shelf,
no ladder that tall, i cant reach that high,
the shelf seems higher than a bird in the sky.

who did this to me, myself or another,
this question has tainted me with much bother,
could this be forever, or just for a while,
a day is an inch, in life that's a mile.

in this endless sea, a raft i am on,
seeking a maelstrom, help me poseidon!
gave up long ago, on my mindless being,
like cyclops of love, not much i am seeing.

my mind is tired, my cuts do not bleed,
im scared of love, your trust i shall need,
show me the world, show me escape,
from this hollow existance i shall fall like a grape.

my journey continues, i live every day,
counting sheep in my bed as i lay,
save me from this, bitter-sweet solitude,
ill thank you forever, with much gratitude.

give you the world, give you myself,
your love will lift me right to that shelf,
ill pick up my feelings, and give them to you,
my heart and your heart will bind like glue.

the poem ends here, not much left to tell,
cluttered with thoughts, trying to yell,
forever i wait here, forever i dream,
walk off to seclusion, on this endless beam...


9/28/2000

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 2 [informant] => alexk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Love

Contributed by alexk on Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 07:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



feeling so cold, alone in my sorrow,
heart aching, mind wishing to borrow,
a piece of warm love, a piece of you,
but everyday i wake up feeling blue.

denied of this sense, a wonderful savior,
i try everyday, to find you -- my behavior,
why am i so sad and burried in pain,
troublesome days, all are passing in vain.

my mind's eye is closed to the light,
when its dark, it can open at night,
scream out a word, but nothing to say,
here safe in abyss, in my bed i shall lay.

dozing off through the void, into myself,
feelings are stored, very far on a shelf,
no ladder that tall, i cant reach that high,
the shelf seems higher than a bird in the sky.

who did this to me, myself or another,
this question has tainted me with much bother,
could this be forever, or just for a while,
a day is an inch, in life that's a mile.

in this endless sea, a raft i am on,
seeking a maelstrom, help me poseidon!
gave up long ago, on my mindless being,
like cyclops of love, not much i am seeing.

my mind is tired, my cuts do not bleed,
im scared of love, your trust i shall need,
show me the world, show me escape,
from this hollow existance i shall fall like a grape.

my journey continues, i live every day,
counting sheep in my bed as i lay,
save me from this, bitter-sweet solitude,
ill thank you forever, with much gratitude.

give you the world, give you myself,
your love will lift me right to that shelf,
ill pick up my feelings, and give them to you,
my heart and your heart will bind like glue.

the poem ends here, not much left to tell,
cluttered with thoughts, trying to yell,
forever i wait here, forever i dream,
walk off to seclusion, on this endless beam...


9/28/2000





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Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 01:38:15 PM AEST
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Well done. Lots of feeling and imagery in this one. If I had to pick one line as a favorite it would be:

"a day is an inch, in life that's a mile."

Great line.
Excellent write.

Curtis


Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 29th September 2002 @ 04:46:45 PM AEST
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Nicely written.... enjoyed it..
Welcome to YPDC....
Jenni




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