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Cyanide
Contributed by
Funny_Pants
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:56:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I find these lines in symmetry
with rhyming verses and meters
but then I write off the page
and look for other features.
They hide inside the double o's
and underneath the single r's
and roll off the minstrels tounge
when spoken under shining stars.
As if to say that they had meaning
and they were more than words and letters
but if I ask you would you tell me
that I could do much better?
I sometimes wish that I could write
with portable phrases I place here and there
and with more potable substances
so you can digest it without any error.
I try not to think of ending such things
as novels and dreams and storys of woe
and as I come to wake from a thought
I try to think not of where I must go.
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Funny_Pants
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2004-04-16 10:56:55]
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Re: Cyanide
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by bernard on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:01:36 AM AEST
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Well done Funnypants you have just placed a real good poem on this list. I appreciated it very much.
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Re: Cyanide
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by Bloodyrose on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 12:00:58 PM AEST
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| I love the subject matter. Really interesting poem. xoxo |
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