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[title] => A little Girl's Hero
[time] => 2004-04-14 18:47:22
[hometext] => this is about me yes... except i didnt have to search the sewers ... i work 64 hrs a week and go to school full time... and everyone says its a midlife crisis on my daddys behalf... who knows ?? i miss him
[bodytext] => Tears mix with raindrops as they fall upon her face
The sewer `s where she has to go, to hunt for all her food
There's no one left to hold her up
Her daddy let her go
She's lost what was so dear to her, despite all of his flaws.
She knows this aint her daddy by the glare upon his face
It breaks her heart to see him so ...
uncaring
unremorseful
and so low
She never thought it'd happen, `til the day her fears came true
She lost what so dear her, the daddy that she knew
Her daddy was her sunshine, her only caring soul
The person she could turn to when the devil took his toll
But what to do when he got him too, your only pride and joy
The tears dont seem to satifsy and the sobs are not no ploy
there's no one left turn too
No one seems to care
And like it'd matter anyway because her daddy still isnt there!
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A little Girl's Hero
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JennyFruFru
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:47:22 PM in AEST
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Tears mix with raindrops as they fall upon her face
The sewer `s where she has to go, to hunt for all her food
There's no one left to hold her up
Her daddy let her go
She's lost what was so dear to her, despite all of his flaws.
She knows this aint her daddy by the glare upon his face
It breaks her heart to see him so ...
uncaring
unremorseful
and so low
She never thought it'd happen, `til the day her fears came true
She lost what so dear her, the daddy that she knew
Her daddy was her sunshine, her only caring soul
The person she could turn to when the devil took his toll
But what to do when he got him too, your only pride and joy
The tears dont seem to satifsy and the sobs are not no ploy
there's no one left turn too
No one seems to care
And like it'd matter anyway because her daddy still isnt there!
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JennyFruFru
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2004-04-14 18:47:22]
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:50:06 PM AEST
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That was really moveing. I hope everything turns out alright for you, but im sure that it will do.
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by arden on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:54:11 PM AEST
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so moveing and so sad.
your words are so meaninful and deep. a very well written poem, the flow was amazing. great write.
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:59:41 PM AEST
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I for one want to say "I am very very proud of you". Not many young people your age have that kind of inner strength and stamina. You are a strong loving person and will make a good life for yourself. I just want to say to you that I am always here if you want to talk or just need a friend.
Love n rainbows,
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:05:46 PM AEST
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| At times we feel so very alone, we ask for a friend, and a warm feeling of home. Tears you bring with sweet gentle words, know now and always they are constantly heard. May your wishes come true, and your dreams be sweet, and everyone in your life return to you, the sweet gentle smile that is upon your face. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:39:24 PM AEST
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Wow girl, this is so sad.
It's one thing to loose a father by death but it's another the way u discribe things.
this is an awesome write!
Kepp the faith and put him tottaly in God's hands and let God fix his problem.
I will continue to pray for u.
Luv, huggs,
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:03:02 PM AEST
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Awww Jenny This Is So Very Sad, And Very Touching ....Your In My Prayers Always....God Bless
*********LoVe**AnGeL**********
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by venkat on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:06:50 AM AEST
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| Oh..sad..really heart moving..that was a great loss to the little girl..well done Jenny. venkat |
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by bernard on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:51:06 AM AEST
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Wonderful tale of despair. Kids are so helpless against Adults whether parents or family or strangers. Kids they all need our love and protection.
bernard |
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:33:41 PM AEST
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| This is sad but I like it. Your dad is missing something in his life |
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Re: A little Girl's Hero
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by NightOwl on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:59:06 AM AEST
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Awesome poem... That's something I can really relate to. The pain never goes away. Keep your chin up! It WILL get better. Eventually you'll realize that, no matter what, you have to go forward from here. Good luck and God Bless!
*~Erin~* |
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