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Array ( [sid] => 43241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So Sweet, So Wonderful [time] => 2004-04-14 17:36:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She looks bold, but what shyness is she!
My words might look hardly to get on mind…
But what clearness I can see her! Even if I become so blind…

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

She walks she talks and her nose up to the sky…
So conceited she looks, But what a simplex is she!
She’s like a floating feather smoothly swinging far up so high…

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

She looks Tough,
Her mind looks like a sly fox
But what innocence I see her!
So easy, so weak, like the soft skin covers her cheek…

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

Hardly to sneak a look from her charming eye
But for her sake I might be a spy…
When you sail into her face, it feels like you deeply lost in the space…
Oh this picture can’t be erased

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

What a cute angel when she smiles
She’ll take your mind away about thousands of miles

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

Beside her I feel so perfect, so complete
Imagining how healing will be her touch! And how she’ll fasten my heart to beat!
Imagining how warmness will be cuddling her! And how it will bring me back to life
After I was like dead meat…

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 447 [topic] => 2 [informant] => OMEGA_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
So Sweet, So Wonderful

Contributed by OMEGA_ on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:36:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



She looks bold, but what shyness is she!
My words might look hardly to get on mind…
But what clearness I can see her! Even if I become so blind…

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

She walks she talks and her nose up to the sky…
So conceited she looks, But what a simplex is she!
She’s like a floating feather smoothly swinging far up so high…

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

She looks Tough,
Her mind looks like a sly fox
But what innocence I see her!
So easy, so weak, like the soft skin covers her cheek…

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

Hardly to sneak a look from her charming eye
But for her sake I might be a spy…
When you sail into her face, it feels like you deeply lost in the space…
Oh this picture can’t be erased

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

What a cute angel when she smiles
She’ll take your mind away about thousands of miles

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?

Beside her I feel so perfect, so complete
Imagining how healing will be her touch! And how she’ll fasten my heart to beat!
Imagining how warmness will be cuddling her! And how it will bring me back to life
After I was like dead meat…

So sweet, So wonderful, isn’t she?




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Re: So Sweet, So Wonderful (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:42:42 PM AEST
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why dont you print it out and give it to her? just ask her to proff it for you for a class or project or sumthing... maybe she'll get the idea... its a lovely piece.... :) good work :)


Re: So Sweet, So Wonderful (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:32:46 PM AEST
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In the title i ment "wonderful" not "wonderfull" fastly typed it ..sorry


Re: So Sweet, So Wonderful (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:08:21 AM AEST
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This is a very sweet wonderful write.
Very creative.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: So Sweet, So Wonderful (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:37:08 PM AEST
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ooo! this is one of the most sweetest most loving poems! it is enchantingly dear! i love absolutely everything about it; minus the dead meat reference lol, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: So Sweet, So Wonderful (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:08:37 PM AEST
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I get it and I understand it, Been there. cool write ...




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