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Array ( [sid] => 4318 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Token [time] => 2002-09-26 20:15:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => lookin at him hurt you
is proof of whats wrong with this life
why when i see it, it feels like a sharp knife

i could treat you better than you can dream
and no little strings in between
from in and out
you'll know what i mean

But ill still sit here
and you'll never know
that i have so much more to show

ill sit here miserably
knowing ill never persuade you
to be mine
not with any reason or rhyme
not in time, or at the end of time
will you be mine

I almost feel bad
but why should I
I almost want to cry
but why should i spend the time?
cuz to you, im not worth a dime
to cry 4 you, would be a crime

So ill continue to act like i dont care
even when its too much to bare
even when i wake up at night and your in my nightmare
cuz to me its not fair

you can be so ignorant
and not even notice the little things
all you have is your hot guy flings
and your rich man's rings
but none of that comes on love's wings

reality check
take this little advice token
your heart will get broken!

i hope you live and learn
and find what you never were looking for
because that is the true door
to anything more
that you could dream for [comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 22 [informant] => wil_ca [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Token

Contributed by wil_ca on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 08:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

lookin at him hurt you
is proof of whats wrong with this life
why when i see it, it feels like a sharp knife

i could treat you better than you can dream
and no little strings in between
from in and out
you'll know what i mean

But ill still sit here
and you'll never know
that i have so much more to show

ill sit here miserably
knowing ill never persuade you
to be mine
not with any reason or rhyme
not in time, or at the end of time
will you be mine

I almost feel bad
but why should I
I almost want to cry
but why should i spend the time?
cuz to you, im not worth a dime
to cry 4 you, would be a crime

So ill continue to act like i dont care
even when its too much to bare
even when i wake up at night and your in my nightmare
cuz to me its not fair

you can be so ignorant
and not even notice the little things
all you have is your hot guy flings
and your rich man's rings
but none of that comes on love's wings

reality check
take this little advice token
your heart will get broken!

i hope you live and learn
and find what you never were looking for
because that is the true door
to anything more
that you could dream for

Copyright © wil_ca ... [ 2002-09-26 20:15:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Token (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 11:42:37 PM AEST
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Sitting idly by while a loved one is being hurt is something very hard to bare....good luck to ya

Re: Token (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 12:50:18 AM AEST
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With hope, maybe oneday she'll realize she wants more out of a relationship... and there you will be. The hard part is waiting for that day to arrive, not knowing if it ever will. Good luck to you.

Nice write

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