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A velvet kiss upon my lips
And you blend into the night
You smile once, in the darkness,
To set my dreams alight.

We loved for what seemed a lifetime
Beneath a gibbous moon,
Our bodies entwined in deep embrace
That made my spirit swoon.

I thought I was your succubus
Your lust I was to draw,
But instead you were my incubus
And left me craving more.

Did it really happen?
Was the union true
Or congressus subtilis,
A dream I had of you.

The white of your smile
The touch of your lips,
The warmth of your breath
And the thrust of your hips
- Gone, but not forgotten. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 2 [informant] => spike [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 40 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

NocturnNocturne

Contributed by spike on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:10:13 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A velvet kiss upon my lips
And you blend into the night
You smile once, in the darkness,
To set my dreams alight.

We loved for what seemed a lifetime
Beneath a gibbous moon,
Our bodies entwined in deep embrace
That made my spirit swoon.

I thought I was your succubus
Your lust I was to draw,
But instead you were my incubus
And left me craving more.

Did it really happen?
Was the union true
Or congressus subtilis,
A dream I had of you.

The white of your smile
The touch of your lips,
The warmth of your breath
And the thrust of your hips
- Gone, but not forgotten.

Copyright © spike ... [ 2004-04-14 08:10:13]
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Re: NocturnNocturne (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:16:42 AM AEST
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Another great poem has left your pen Spike you have a wonderful way with words keep em coming !

bernard

Re: NocturnNocturne (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:19:47 AM AEST
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Pretty and sensuous are the first things that came to my mind upon reading this. Stellar write, especially this verse:

I thought I was your succubus
Your lust I was to draw,
But instead you were my incubus
And left me craving more.

Re: NocturnNocturne (User Rating: 1 )
by Chade on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 09:11:31 AM AEST
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I think in life wwe all know that feeling.

Chade

Re: NocturnNocturne (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:22:19 PM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: NocturnNocturne (User Rating: 1 )
by Bunni on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:39:56 PM AEST
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My favorite line was the last one; it didn't rhyme, and it was the perfect ending.

Re: NocturnNocturne (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:51:32 PM AEST
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You sure have a beautiful way with words when it comes to love ..... :o)

PumpkinPie

Re: NocturnNocturne (User Rating: 1 )
by NirvanaLotus on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:23:22 PM AEST
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you are most certainly a most unbelievably wonderful poet spike. i love this one, the reference to incubus and sucubus were so elegant and beutiful...

Re: NocturnNocturne (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:41:19 AM AEST
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Enticing and . . . eerily seductive.

I much enjoyed reading through this.

Keep writing.

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