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Array ( [sid] => 43111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why Suicide [time] => 2004-04-13 20:22:58 [hometext] => don't worry!! im not gonna kill myself...not now anyway...... :oP [bodytext] => Each day thousands die,
They finnaly cracked,
Loss of sanity,
Loss of a love,

Why dose it have to be like this,
When people decide,
They've had enough,
Outta of love and outta luck,

Nothing can stop you,
When you live in **** on earth,
No sanity left od right,
Nothing to give,

Why do we feel like this,
Suicide is just a way,
A plan to escape,
One planed by all,

Almost everyone tries,
To let go of it all,
Leave it all behind,
Never look back.

To screwed up inside,
Nobody knows,
And no one cares,
Had enough,

What makes us feel this way,
Used and tossed,
Broken hearted,
I cracked,

Fall asleep and never wake,
Fight for my sanity,
Of whats left over,
If any,

Consumed in a world of hate,
Shed from my battered soul,
Forced to be happy,
Another die's,

I've tried to help,
Always to late,
Not enough time,
They melt away,

Help them,
But not myself,
I rot and die inside,
Alone untill its all over,

No more luck,
No more love,
Suicide,
Goodbye. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Why Suicide

Contributed by TwEeK on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:22:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Each day thousands die,
They finnaly cracked,
Loss of sanity,
Loss of a love,

Why dose it have to be like this,
When people decide,
They've had enough,
Outta of love and outta luck,

Nothing can stop you,
When you live in **** on earth,
No sanity left od right,
Nothing to give,

Why do we feel like this,
Suicide is just a way,
A plan to escape,
One planed by all,

Almost everyone tries,
To let go of it all,
Leave it all behind,
Never look back.

To screwed up inside,
Nobody knows,
And no one cares,
Had enough,

What makes us feel this way,
Used and tossed,
Broken hearted,
I cracked,

Fall asleep and never wake,
Fight for my sanity,
Of whats left over,
If any,

Consumed in a world of hate,
Shed from my battered soul,
Forced to be happy,
Another die's,

I've tried to help,
Always to late,
Not enough time,
They melt away,

Help them,
But not myself,
I rot and die inside,
Alone untill its all over,

No more luck,
No more love,
Suicide,
Goodbye.

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-04-13 20:22:58]
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Re: Why Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:31:09 PM AEST
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I don't know how to comment on this poem but it was really good and heartrenching because i went through the same stuff. Everyone gets to wanting it and trying it...hell i cut myself for almost a year before i got help and stopped and haven't cut myself for a good while. I hope u get over this pain my poet friend. Love:::Kirby

Re: Why Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by DirtyFool on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:08:35 AM AEST
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This poem is very powerful and moving. even though it is sad it is a really good poem i really liked it. u truly have talent. keep it up

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