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ERECTion
Contributed by
elizabethfusco
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:33:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Tell me
what is perfection
and
does that popular girl have it?
Do you think of her
and
does she cause an erection?
In those hours of darkness
who is left for you to verbally molest?
Have you heard the word neglect?
'Cause you demonstrate it everyday.
Do you ever sit back and reflect?
Maybe your hate is undirected
but why did it choose me
why was I selected?
Here's my plea of repression :
now you can stop
and please end your aggression.
This might be too much to digest.
Now you can stop
and put all this to rest.
Focus on her perfection
and
refine your selection.
Copyright ©
elizabethfusco
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2004-04-11 19:33:59]
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Re: ERECTion
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by poet_of_anger on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:40:34 PM AEST
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Very interesting, very nice. Good write, I can definitely tell what you are talking about, and sort of know what you mean by it too.
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Re: ERECTion
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by faithmairee on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:55:37 PM AEST
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intriguing poem with a strong delivery,,,excellent work! welcome aboard!
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Re: ERECTion
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by dolly_dagger on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:59:46 PM AEST
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i like it. gritty, powerful, real.
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