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Array ( [sid] => 42776 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost... [time] => 2004-04-11 16:47:31 [hometext] => This is a short one... at least for me... it's a short one... I was given the idea for it by my nephew's GF. Hope u like it.... leave comment if u desire to... [bodytext] => Lost...
So lost... am I...feeling blue
Just livin' in my rose- colored world without you...
I'm not sure what I'm so lost about or who...
I just know that I am...
And maybe it's you...?
It's something I've lost... so recently...
And I'm feeling so lost too.... and in need of something from you
What I have lost... is something that can't be replaced so easily...
I've lost my heart... to you...

Lost...
So lost... am I...feeling blue
Just livin' in my rose- colored world without you... [comments] => 8 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Lost...

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:47:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Lost...
So lost... am I...feeling blue
Just livin' in my rose- colored world without you...
I'm not sure what I'm so lost about or who...
I just know that I am...
And maybe it's you...?
It's something I've lost... so recently...
And I'm feeling so lost too.... and in need of something from you
What I have lost... is something that can't be replaced so easily...
I've lost my heart... to you...

Lost...
So lost... am I...feeling blue
Just livin' in my rose- colored world without you...




Copyright © kidpoet_213 ... [ 2004-04-11 16:47:31]
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Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:06:11 PM AEST
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awwww that was sad , sweet and so honest.

Very well done
Roses
Larry


Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:19:39 PM AEST
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Oh yes.....I can certainly identify right now....I feel so lost myself...
Jenni


Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:19:47 PM AEST
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Awww, what a sad write. You painted a really big picture with this write. Alot of emotion put to this. I liked it. *S* Cynthia


Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:57:38 PM AEST
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As I read this poem, my heart sank and my brow furrowed and I commenced feeling just as you had described. Extremely picturesque.
Bravo and encore!!!
Love,
Chels


Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:26:26 PM AEST
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i truly like this and you express yourself so well keep it up :)


Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:59:57 PM AEST
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This was a really great read. I really enjoyed this , you did a wonderful job. Keep them rolling.


Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:57:17 AM AEST
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Very sweet and caring.

Thank you for sharing this with us it was a very good poem.

Kie


Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:01:58 PM AEST
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i have my own pair of rose colored glasses... i put them on when iwant to pretend that the world is perfect and not ful of sadness... im glad someone else has a pair too... but its ashame that we have to hide all our sadness... such a touching write :)




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