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Array ( [sid] => 42554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Come Cry With Me [time] => 2004-04-10 02:23:10 [hometext] => This just came to me... from outta nowhere... I have no idea... if it even makes a whole lot of sense... leave comments and let me know... lol [bodytext] => Everytime I pick up the pen
To write down another poem
I feel as though... I'm about to embark on a great journey through my mind
To some far off distant land
That's hiding somewhere deep within...
Just waiting to be found again...
'Cause I'm never sure of where I'm going...
Or even where I've been...
Down a path I trod...
Never knowing... where it will end...

So won't you...
Come cry with me... as the journey begins...

Come cry with me... as a new song of love I'll sing for keeps
Come cry with me... as I'm falling out of love... you see
Come cry with me... as I'm trying to let go of all this pain and suffering
Come cry with me... as my heart is falling down... so hard that when it hits the ground
My heart is will be shattered... lying in bits and pieces all around
'Cause the love won't flow... like my tears streaming down...
Unbidden they roll... down my cheeks to find a place to die
As you come cry with me

Caught... as I am... in the distance of my mind
Sinking fast in the liquid sands of time
Together... we cry... our tears will pool at our feet
If you will... come cry with me...

Love seems to hold no meaning anymore...
As my love just walked out the door...
This love seemed to be forever...
One that time could not erase...
But things have happened to make a sudden change
To tear the heart apart... in life's rains
Oh won't you... come cry with me today?

I still don't understand...
All the turmoil that lies...
Buried so deep... behind those beautiful... beautiful eyes...
It's still all a big question mark... in my mind
That I'll try and understand... in time...
If you will... come cry with me...

Walk by me one more time...
Hear the love crying out from deep inside... of this heart of mine
Fly away on this dream with me
Discover it's charms... it's beauty
Enfolded in the love and friendship of this heart...
Where a hug and a kiss reign supreme..
And hate is defeated...
With tears of happiness and joy...
As you come cry with me...
As this journey is wihout an end...
It just echoes through time... and time again... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 48 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Come Cry With Me

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 02:23:10 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Everytime I pick up the pen
To write down another poem
I feel as though... I'm about to embark on a great journey through my mind
To some far off distant land
That's hiding somewhere deep within...
Just waiting to be found again...
'Cause I'm never sure of where I'm going...
Or even where I've been...
Down a path I trod...
Never knowing... where it will end...

So won't you...
Come cry with me... as the journey begins...

Come cry with me... as a new song of love I'll sing for keeps
Come cry with me... as I'm falling out of love... you see
Come cry with me... as I'm trying to let go of all this pain and suffering
Come cry with me... as my heart is falling down... so hard that when it hits the ground
My heart is will be shattered... lying in bits and pieces all around
'Cause the love won't flow... like my tears streaming down...
Unbidden they roll... down my cheeks to find a place to die
As you come cry with me

Caught... as I am... in the distance of my mind
Sinking fast in the liquid sands of time
Together... we cry... our tears will pool at our feet
If you will... come cry with me...

Love seems to hold no meaning anymore...
As my love just walked out the door...
This love seemed to be forever...
One that time could not erase...
But things have happened to make a sudden change
To tear the heart apart... in life's rains
Oh won't you... come cry with me today?

I still don't understand...
All the turmoil that lies...
Buried so deep... behind those beautiful... beautiful eyes...
It's still all a big question mark... in my mind
That I'll try and understand... in time...
If you will... come cry with me...

Walk by me one more time...
Hear the love crying out from deep inside... of this heart of mine
Fly away on this dream with me
Discover it's charms... it's beauty
Enfolded in the love and friendship of this heart...
Where a hug and a kiss reign supreme..
And hate is defeated...
With tears of happiness and joy...
As you come cry with me...
As this journey is wihout an end...
It just echoes through time... and time again...




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Re: Come Cry With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 02:39:27 AM AEST
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Oh girl. this is an awesome write. Makes plenty sense to me.
Good work! The ones u jus reach out and grab it as it flows are some of the best poems. I'm sure it will many
Luv, huggs, proud,
yo momma,
emy


Re: Come Cry With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:33:13 AM AEST
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Wow, I think this would make an excellent song, the rhythm and flow of the poem is just kick ass. Well done.


Re: Come Cry With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:19:59 AM AEST
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This Poem Is Awesome...I Loved It....It Made
Plenty Enough Sense To Me...I Enjoyed Reading It...Wonderful Write :-)
*********LoVe**AnGeL**********
**********************************


Re: Come Cry With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:24:41 PM AEST
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excellent write...you are amazingly talented...i look forward to reading more




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