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If I died
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:47:54 PM in AEST
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If I died people would see
That the one thing they didnt know
Was that they didnt know me
Theyd realize
That there was a dark side in me
That couldnt be let out
And that I had a love
That I couldnt live without
But he left
And I gave up
Id be dead
And my secret would be let out
I have so many doubts if I died
I cant even count
The tears that Ive cried
I only know of so many
If I die
My feelings will be out
People would be standing by my grave
Sobbing and thinking
Of why I did what I did
But if theyre smart
Theyll realize
That my message was hid
Theyll figure it out
And pass it on
Then I guess the world will be
A better and happier place
Without me
And my pale ugly face
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xoblondiebabix3
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2004-04-08 21:47:54]
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Re: If I died
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by Shadow on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:35:02 PM AEST
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2 reasions i comment on this one it's good and i'm lucky to be the first and second i've been there. This was good i can relate to it. why others don't comment i don't know. but let it now be said a poems beautie is in the readers eye. I like it. Keep them coming. I'll read them if i can.
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