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Array ( [sid] => 42358 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Of Friends And Letters [time] => 2004-04-08 16:56:30 [hometext] => To my dear Daniela, to my dear friend... [bodytext] => the letters light the darkened prose
i've worn that face but you know
the sideswipe scars don't carry weight
and still... they come with time.
i'll chance every secondhand gaze
through each seamless modern way
you gave and have given every state
and will... that is more than fine.
i know that you'll push for
each day to this day
count none lost and then more
with little left to say.

taking chance on distant tastes.
dream of chosen points together.
look closely at all details
and what they entail and just think
on this one moment, like eternity.
and you'll still be in my heart...
in my heart...

passing days leave me nowhere to go
when my sight is set on toronto
left sitting back still i can wait
until... i may start to mind.
driven down gone home from working
thinking more how it's not working
you'll be there and that's great
still... i am feeling blind.
and you know i'll push for
each day to this day
nothing's lost and no more
with little left to say.

taking chance on distant tastes.
dream of chosen points together.
look closely at every tale
and what they entail and just think
another moment, just like eternity.
and still you're in my heart...
in my heart...

so i'll set the clock right
each evening past the sunlight rays
and cushion marks set a spark
a hope for another day.
so i'll set my sights down
soon heading up to your hometown fair
and these moments spent thinking
will mean so much more when i'm there. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Of Friends And Letters

Contributed by Remy on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:56:30 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

the letters light the darkened prose
i've worn that face but you know
the sideswipe scars don't carry weight
and still... they come with time.
i'll chance every secondhand gaze
through each seamless modern way
you gave and have given every state
and will... that is more than fine.
i know that you'll push for
each day to this day
count none lost and then more
with little left to say.

taking chance on distant tastes.
dream of chosen points together.
look closely at all details
and what they entail and just think
on this one moment, like eternity.
and you'll still be in my heart...
in my heart...

passing days leave me nowhere to go
when my sight is set on toronto
left sitting back still i can wait
until... i may start to mind.
driven down gone home from working
thinking more how it's not working
you'll be there and that's great
still... i am feeling blind.
and you know i'll push for
each day to this day
nothing's lost and no more
with little left to say.

taking chance on distant tastes.
dream of chosen points together.
look closely at every tale
and what they entail and just think
another moment, just like eternity.
and still you're in my heart...
in my heart...

so i'll set the clock right
each evening past the sunlight rays
and cushion marks set a spark
a hope for another day.
so i'll set my sights down
soon heading up to your hometown fair
and these moments spent thinking
will mean so much more when i'm there.

Copyright © Remy ... [ 2004-04-08 16:56:30]
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Re: Of Friends And Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:38:07 PM AEST
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Awww this was such a sweet poem. I thought it was full of heart...Loved every word.

Kie

Re: Of Friends And Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:10:47 PM AEST
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Now that I've got my speech back, I figure I should acknowledge this publicly....you're awesome, this is awesome. Thank you SO much! :)

Dani xx

Re: Of Friends And Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:36:48 PM AEST
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Awwww, isn't this just the sweetest write? Hehehehe this is cute Remy. I loved it. *S* Cynthia

Re: Of Friends And Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:37:03 AM AEST
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you have a terrific heart :) make sure you hold on to that :)

Re: Of Friends And Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:59:58 PM AEST
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Sweet and caring...loved this..
Jenni

Re: Of Friends And Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:55:04 AM AEST
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this was sooo beautiful!!! an absolutely gorgeus poem, i loved this very very very much. thanks for posting this remy.

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