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Raw...Still
Contributed by
reilt
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Raw.
This has been so slow to heal.
Time has not...
Too much faith placed
Between.
You...you are a rare man.
Ageless of my pain,
Unaware of,
Indifferent to.
Here it goes again
That suffering so
You follow unscathed
Into a light of being
That escapes me.
Oh you...you are unique
To have caused this
And owned no blame.
Oh but for me
How hard it's been.
Struggling and tormenting
To a point of no return.
And your's ...so effortless.
You breeze right in
As the wild winds of change
Wrecked and ravaged me.
Yes you...you are individual
In your breed.
And I breathe so uneasily
With the weight of the world,
Once my oyster,
On my shoulders.
It's a cross I bear everyday,
Blistered, tired, sore.
Aching.
My bones clatter and shake,
Skin red and worn.
Fragile, my heart breaks.
This has been so slow to heal.
Frequently haunting
No matter how infrequent your kind
As unkind as you have been...
It is raw
Still.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-08 09:56:09]
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Re: Raw...Still
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:22:59 AM AEST
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This one really scrapes your soul!
Peace to you!
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Re: Raw...Still
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by Kie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:16:31 PM AEST
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If pain could be placed into words and felt you would have accomplished this feat with this poem. Hit me straight in the heart with this one...
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