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Array ( [sid] => 42200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Away to the Never Ending [time] => 2004-04-07 16:42:32 [hometext] => Group Writes are started in the forums, and once finished added here. Please feel free to join in, or contact the moderators for more information. (The poem is set out with the contributing author's name above their contribution to this group write.) [bodytext] => Built up one word at a time. Writers in order of appearance.

Away to the Never Ending

Jellybellyprincess, Daniela_Maria_Violin, ShadowDaughter, Jackee_line, Soulless, MoonlitAngel, Happiness, arden, Avarice_Riot, blueheart, Putteragain, and venkat

Dancing silently under the silky,
velvety canopy bed sheets.
I'm tripping among roses,
being careful not to crush
your spirit's evanescent quality.
We've done away with negativity,
though sometimes we feel that
it never truly goes away.

Come with me to utopia,
in search of magical life
where paths lead to hidden,
secluded mystery where we are
dreaming of wild fantasies of
subconscious mind and
where past meets
they present themselves
in more colourful tones
swirling like prisms
Reflecting sensations untold. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 374 [topic] => 45 [informant] => YPDC_group_writes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => group )
Away to the Never Ending

Contributed by YPDC_group_writes on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic: group



Built up one word at a time. Writers in order of appearance.

Away to the Never Ending

Jellybellyprincess, Daniela_Maria_Violin, ShadowDaughter, Jackee_line, Soulless, MoonlitAngel, Happiness, arden, Avarice_Riot, blueheart, Putteragain, and venkat

Dancing silently under the silky,
velvety canopy bed sheets.
I'm tripping among roses,
being careful not to crush
your spirit's evanescent quality.
We've done away with negativity,
though sometimes we feel that
it never truly goes away.

Come with me to utopia,
in search of magical life
where paths lead to hidden,
secluded mystery where we are
dreaming of wild fantasies of
subconscious mind and
where past meets
they present themselves
in more colourful tones
swirling like prisms
Reflecting sensations untold.




Copyright © YPDC_group_writes ... [ 2004-04-07 16:42:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Away to the Never Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:32:06 PM AEST
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Well done to all of you!!! What a clever way to write such a beautiful poem, think I'll have a go at the next one, feeling brave lol.

Ali xx


Re: Away to the Never Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:08:46 PM AEST
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An enthralling look into the aspirations of a poetic collective.

"where past meets
they present themselves
in more colourful tones
swirling like prisms"

This is quite exceptional, considering how difficult I think it must be to keep a thread alive.
Well done, the lot of you.


Re: Away to the Never Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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Outstanding work!! ( tips hat and bows to the wealth of talent at this site)

Very well done,
Roses and drinks all around barkeep
Larry


Re: Away to the Never Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:03:18 PM AEST
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Nice group effort. Bravo carry on .

Whisper


Re: Away to the Never Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:07:16 AM AEST
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Aaah..now I found this..it is o.k very cool and beatiful.
venkat


Re: Away to the Never Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:08:57 AM AEST
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Aaah..now I found this..it is o.k very cool and beatiful.
venkat


Re: Away to the Never Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:08:57 AM AEST
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Aaah..now I found this..it is o.k very cool and beatiful.
venkat




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