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Array ( [sid] => 42093 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As he Looks below [time] => 2004-04-06 22:31:47 [hometext] => im wanting to enter this in a contest of some kind, so please give me some feedback if u get a chance...thanks and god bless! [bodytext] => Sequestered as can be
Optimistically looking down, encompassing his creation
His once exquisite universe, now loosening its grasp on him
He remains aloof from the image of evil displayed on Earth
His existence is leisurely disappearing from the hearts of many
He still unwaveringly and sanguinely watches, knowing that someday all will see
Clasping the limited amount of radiant goodness left amongst the sin
Though his entity endures forever, he knows only those who believe will not be exiled from eternity with him
He undeviatingly watches his children laggardly making their way back to the light
He begins unwinding his worry as they remove themselves from the remote darkness
Speculating his masterpiece, he rests in peace for he knows they will one day rest with him as well
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As he Looks below

Contributed by bychristimsaved on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Sequestered as can be
Optimistically looking down, encompassing his creation
His once exquisite universe, now loosening its grasp on him
He remains aloof from the image of evil displayed on Earth
His existence is leisurely disappearing from the hearts of many
He still unwaveringly and sanguinely watches, knowing that someday all will see
Clasping the limited amount of radiant goodness left amongst the sin
Though his entity endures forever, he knows only those who believe will not be exiled from eternity with him
He undeviatingly watches his children laggardly making their way back to the light
He begins unwinding his worry as they remove themselves from the remote darkness
Speculating his masterpiece, he rests in peace for he knows they will one day rest with him as well

Copyright © bychristimsaved ... [ 2004-04-06 22:31:47]
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Re: As he Looks below (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:37:10 PM AEST
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Excellent job. The wording is very well-done, and the spelling is great!
Very good theme too. I enjoyed this a lot.
Keep it up!
Andrew

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