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Array ( [sid] => 41718 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losing [time] => 2004-04-04 08:51:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Each moment spent in the world is a moment spent away from you

My longing desire
All that I admire
My simple blue eyes
The gaze that belies
My heart’s strongest passion
All that I can’t ration

I am losing you with each conversation

Laughing at a tease
Flirting with rookies
Dancing and happiness
Causing me to forget
Sex with another man
It’s more than I can stand

Please darling just say it, I know you can

Whisper it at night
While you hold me tight
Shout it out in passion
Do it in any fashion
Say it loud or say it soft
I don’t care enough is enough

I can take it no longer, my craving is gone

I can sleep somehow
Without you now
I’m not near the phone
Neither am I ever alone
It’s not the love that’s gone
It’s the higher being to which I was drawn

You have to take me back; you have to admit your love

I’m stuck
Out of luck
Can’t stay any longer
Wishing to god I was stronger
Wanting my want back
To have my whole world out of whack

I really miss that feeling but, I know you to well now. The mystery is gone
The only thing that can protect us
Our option, our aegis
It’s a commitment my dear
But you’re so scared I can smell your fear
I wish you’d just say it
Before I leave and you regret it

Darling I’m scared because I love you too but I need security with it
Please if I leave I’m sure I’ll distress, feel regret and wonder always wonder
You’re my best friend
My confidant
And damn good in bed
Can’t we just be together?
Or must I continue feeling ill at ease about this whole thing???
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Losing

Contributed by alisialynn on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:51:09 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Each moment spent in the world is a moment spent away from you

My longing desire
All that I admire
My simple blue eyes
The gaze that belies
My heart’s strongest passion
All that I can’t ration

I am losing you with each conversation

Laughing at a tease
Flirting with rookies
Dancing and happiness
Causing me to forget
Sex with another man
It’s more than I can stand

Please darling just say it, I know you can

Whisper it at night
While you hold me tight
Shout it out in passion
Do it in any fashion
Say it loud or say it soft
I don’t care enough is enough

I can take it no longer, my craving is gone

I can sleep somehow
Without you now
I’m not near the phone
Neither am I ever alone
It’s not the love that’s gone
It’s the higher being to which I was drawn

You have to take me back; you have to admit your love

I’m stuck
Out of luck
Can’t stay any longer
Wishing to god I was stronger
Wanting my want back
To have my whole world out of whack

I really miss that feeling but, I know you to well now. The mystery is gone
The only thing that can protect us
Our option, our aegis
It’s a commitment my dear
But you’re so scared I can smell your fear
I wish you’d just say it
Before I leave and you regret it

Darling I’m scared because I love you too but I need security with it
Please if I leave I’m sure I’ll distress, feel regret and wonder always wonder
You’re my best friend
My confidant
And damn good in bed
Can’t we just be together?
Or must I continue feeling ill at ease about this whole thing???




Copyright © alisialynn ... [ 2004-04-04 08:51:09]
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Re: Losing (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:17:31 AM AEST
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Awww this was so sad. A very good poem and I hope things work out for you.... Kie




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