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Array ( [sid] => 41702 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beyond Another Realm [time] => 2004-04-04 04:02:28 [hometext] => .......sometimes your once in a lifetime chance lasts a lifetime............. [bodytext] => So innocent and very young
in the ways of this world
already a woman
but still such a little girl.

Bated breath for the waiting
a haunted cross to bear
traveled the bridge from her forest
to reach for someone who cared.

Freeing oneself through empowerment
a journey aided by his love
life started then .......just for her
and their passions flew like the doves.

Her walk into the path of sunshine
tears flowing as he cleansed her soul
brought her the love she'd needed
and wickedly made her whole. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Beyond Another Realm

Contributed by jaeann on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:02:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

So innocent and very young
in the ways of this world
already a woman
but still such a little girl.

Bated breath for the waiting
a haunted cross to bear
traveled the bridge from her forest
to reach for someone who cared.

Freeing oneself through empowerment
a journey aided by his love
life started then .......just for her
and their passions flew like the doves.

Her walk into the path of sunshine
tears flowing as he cleansed her soul
brought her the love she'd needed
and wickedly made her whole.

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2004-04-04 04:02:28]
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Re: Beyond Another Realm (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:45:50 PM AEST
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Soft and beautiful, with a hint of the sensual.....very well done :o)
Roses
Larry

Re: Beyond Another Realm (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:46:27 PM AEST
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Jaymee,
I really enjoyed this one. I could even understand......few words but plain to see....
A young girl searching and found was she!
And now with son gone.......it will last for lifetime, that's for sure!
Sad, rather haunting, but with alittle sunshine!
I really like this one Jayme
love you
consue

Re: Beyond Another Realm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:02:36 PM AEST
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you forest dwellers make very good poets! well done.

wildejohnny.

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