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Array ( [sid] => 41652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Gave Me [time] => 2004-04-03 20:31:38 [hometext] => I have been having a tough time writing latley so most of the stuff i put up is not going to be my best work ever [bodytext] => Ever since i last saw your face
I've been letting life slip away
You gave me energy
When i thought i had none
You gave me love
When i thought it was gone
But it wasn't gone
It was just waiting for someone
Someone to come around
And help let it out
And when i did
I was scared
Scared that things might change
When they did
I found it was a beautiful thing
But when you left
You took love with you
I was left with nothing
I shouldn't throw everything away
Just because you left
But like i said
You gave me energy and love
And now i have none.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 24 [informant] => pyrochick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

You Gave Me

Contributed by pyrochick on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:31:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Ever since i last saw your face
I've been letting life slip away
You gave me energy
When i thought i had none
You gave me love
When i thought it was gone
But it wasn't gone
It was just waiting for someone
Someone to come around
And help let it out
And when i did
I was scared
Scared that things might change
When they did
I found it was a beautiful thing
But when you left
You took love with you
I was left with nothing
I shouldn't throw everything away
Just because you left
But like i said
You gave me energy and love
And now i have none.

Copyright © pyrochick ... [ 2004-04-03 20:31:38]
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Re: You Gave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:47:24 PM AEST
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This poem made me sigh. What a bitter poem! I really wish you to find hapiness again! Never give up and keep writing you're doing a great job at it ;)
Anne:D

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