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Freed Minds
Contributed by
Coaster
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:51:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Colors will start to release from the air
Senses of confusion will seem to be fair
Free falling through the common seas
The pounding will always do at its please
The wind flowing will begin to end
And the moan that once was trapped will start to mend
Screams of sadness will begin to heal
And all once touched will begin to feel
The lost things never found is what you'll find
All the wild fires will release from your mind
All the waters surrounding will begin to get low
But the current of your soul will begin to flow
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Coaster
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2004-04-02 12:51:45]
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Re: Freed Minds
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:34:50 PM AEST
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Hmmmmm . . . interesting. I like that sorta lilting sound to it, and it's overall very relaxing, inspiring, hopeful, etc . . . a nice write.
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