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Determined Conscience
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:49:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Confession in silence, drawn in tears
Heart on sleeve, wearing on fears
Treacherous journey into the mind
Danger and curiosity will you to a find.
A psyche of this capacity
Zealous in a famous voracity
Strapped to a bed for analysis
Injected with toxins causing paralysis.
The mind, such a beautiful thing to waste
Where answers to some questions come post haste
Vengeful and unforgiving awareness
Streaked with an alarming bizarreness.
Constituted resilience and determination
Guided images and insincere extermination
Erased memories of past lives dead
Just for a look at yourself inside your head.
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Re: Determined Conscience
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:45:15 AM AEST
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lindsey this is brilliantly creative and exquiste, i have always loved your expression of feelings, wonderful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Determined Conscience
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:03:36 AM AEST
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Very intriguing word choice gives this a unique flavour, and the use of creative rhymes (as opposed to simple and/or cliche ones) make me like it even more. You really have a ton of talent!
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Re: Determined Conscience
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:37:07 PM AEST
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nice work...intriguing, indeed!
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