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Array ( [sid] => 40318 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kill me Now [time] => 2004-03-26 03:26:59 [hometext] => AHA!! My PC lost this ***** the first time, when it FROZE! But I beat you, you * piece of *****!! It took me 20 min to remember this poem, but I * BEAT YOU! [bodytext] =>

Kill me Now

I feel you tiptoe through my skull,
through the blackness,
as I fall

so kill me now

and be done with it,
so done with thee,
I can taste the *****
from when you were me

but still your hand is down my throat,
your erotica, my skin
is blood and burning from your sweat,
my subconcious lust for sin...

so kill me now

Please let me go,
please let me be,
my tormented mind surrounds.
Black slime drips from my tongue,
I know,
your knowledge knows no bounds

YOU KNOW YOU HAVE ME
kill me now
and let me be at peace

When my skull finds fragmentation,
only then I'll find release.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Kill me Now

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:26:59 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Kill me Now

I feel you tiptoe through my skull,
through the blackness,
as I fall

so kill me now

and be done with it,
so done with thee,
I can taste the *****
from when you were me

but still your hand is down my throat,
your erotica, my skin
is blood and burning from your sweat,
my subconcious lust for sin...

so kill me now

Please let me go,
please let me be,
my tormented mind surrounds.
Black slime drips from my tongue,
I know,
your knowledge knows no bounds

YOU KNOW YOU HAVE ME
kill me now
and let me be at peace

When my skull finds fragmentation,
only then I'll find release.

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-03-26 03:26:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Kill me Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:04:52 AM AEST
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Just a comment about your comment before the poem...its hilarious because I just posted a poem about dropping my computer out a 6 story window...LOL
great you remembered....

Re: Kill me Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:17:39 AM AEST
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yeah? and i just posted a comment about the computer one and now this one lol.......yeah....i know the feeling, i live with it everyday but let me tell ya, psyche wards are no fun at all. with 4 attempts on my record the hospistals never leave me alone...so dont do that, which is my point

Re: Kill me Now (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:15:20 AM AEST
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LMFAO, i guess your computer is ***** you off, lol. Great write though,

love it.... :)

Re: Kill me Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:03:29 AM AEST
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LMFAO....loved the comment you made before the poem. My computer can be a real ***** sometimes too. On to the poem: for some reason, it strikes me as erotic in a twisted way. Either way, it's sublime. Congrats.

Re: Kill me Now (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:31:05 PM AEST
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hey, great write, very powerful. hehe. i guess you comp is an a** tho...? its good that you remembered this. luv n hugs, phil xxx

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