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Array ( [sid] => 40265 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => his girl doesn't know? part 2! [time] => 2004-03-25 18:30:48 [hometext] => The consequences, the guilt, the pain. let me know If anyone has ever felt the same? [bodytext] => One more glance I will dare to make
One last kiss i shall dare to take
I know this habbit soon must break
It aint something i want to shake

To give up someone I adore
To now say no forever more
Push him away may be the cure
But i no from him my heart's not pure

Didn't let go, didn't say no
Two crimes that i am bound to show
But now i must, him I will throw
Behind my life, to always go

We once did love, that time has past
Now i know, this feeling wont last
To give you up, for good maybe
For that is the choice, you left me
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 48 [informant] => fallen_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

his girl doesn't know? part 2!

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:30:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

One more glance I will dare to make
One last kiss i shall dare to take
I know this habbit soon must break
It aint something i want to shake

To give up someone I adore
To now say no forever more
Push him away may be the cure
But i no from him my heart's not pure

Didn't let go, didn't say no
Two crimes that i am bound to show
But now i must, him I will throw
Behind my life, to always go

We once did love, that time has past
Now i know, this feeling wont last
To give you up, for good maybe
For that is the choice, you left me

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-03-25 18:30:48]
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Re: his girl doesn't know? part 2! (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:55:05 PM AEST
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Poetic bliis caught up in a madness of emotion and life and its expressed so well, you captivate the reader into your feeling and leave them standing on the edge of eternity waiting for your next piece truely something we all hope to achieve, you know im also always here for you, and dont worry about 'the weight' you put on my shoulders, their pretty big shoulders, and someone with a pretty big heart, i hope

magnificent write one can only pray to even come close too

Luke xxxx

Luke

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