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Broken Palace
Contributed by
ItsRayningTonite
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:46:25 PM in AEST
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A Broken palace
Melted ice sculptures
Decaying monuments
Dusty walls
Fraying Tapestries
Rusty tubs
What a haven
Is this palace
A court of death
A ballroom of bones
Still standing
Once dancing...
Cadaver's gown
Torn
Red fabric
But still moves in the eyes
Of who are watching.
Framed portraits
Paint chipped away
What a beautiful Palace
It truly is.
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2004-03-25 17:46:25]
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Re: Broken Palace
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:07:14 PM AEST
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| Well this was a unique poem. I thought it was going in one direction and it went in another. I like that. It was sort of creepy in a mysterious--whats gonna happen--sort of way. Well done. Kie |
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Re: Broken Palace
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by Pwei on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:08:26 PM AEST
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| Hiya, I think I am going to dream of torn red fabric tonight! I love the imagery! MARK |
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Re: Broken Palace
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:11:03 AM AEST
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