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Array ( [sid] => 40132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CONFESSION [time] => 2004-03-24 22:58:24 [hometext] => My friend helped me write this so I cannot take full credit for it. This poem is just basically saying how we felt at the time.. and unfortenatly, we still feel this way........ [bodytext] => This pain in my heart
is taking over me
I really want to die
I dont deserve to breathe

The screaming voices in my head
are telling me to just hold on
but I strongly believe
things would be better if I were gone

My life was taken over
by this painful case of depression
and now Im writing on this paper
reviling my deepest confession

As tears fall on my paper
I think of all the pain inside
No one ever thought
I would have something to hide

They say they understand
and act like everythings allright
but they arent the ones
who have to put up with this fight

I dont really know
why I feel like this
but what I do know
is that I want to slit my wrists

I dont know why I should live
if I have a bad life
so now its just me,
the dark, and this knife
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Melika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
CONFESSION

Contributed by Melika on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:58:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



This pain in my heart
is taking over me
I really want to die
I dont deserve to breathe

The screaming voices in my head
are telling me to just hold on
but I strongly believe
things would be better if I were gone

My life was taken over
by this painful case of depression
and now Im writing on this paper
reviling my deepest confession

As tears fall on my paper
I think of all the pain inside
No one ever thought
I would have something to hide

They say they understand
and act like everythings allright
but they arent the ones
who have to put up with this fight

I dont really know
why I feel like this
but what I do know
is that I want to slit my wrists

I dont know why I should live
if I have a bad life
so now its just me,
the dark, and this knife




Copyright © Melika ... [ 2004-03-24 22:58:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: CONFESSION (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:29:31 PM AEST
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very informative and nicely written. like all things, what you feel will change sooner or later. as long as you hold on, you will be okay in the end...


Re: CONFESSION (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:26:28 AM AEST
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very powerful and deep with emotion, I totally related to this poem. I hope to read more from you soon.




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