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Breath of Shadows
Contributed by
doug
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:58:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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silent shades of darkness
finger shadows stretching
grasping at my footsteps
as I wander by
silent trees are looming
crowding in around me
limbs reaching for me
smothering my cries
somewhere on the road behind
theres a horrid creature
who gobbles up the moonlight
and scurrys up the trees
I feel that it is there
although I cannot see it
maybe more than one
maybe more than three
I come unto a meadow
and run like hell across it
back into the oak trees
onto the other side
I wait and I watch
to see if something follows
it seems that there is nothing
and everything is fine
I laugh to myself
a trick of the mind
this and nothing more
I turn to head for home
rabid horrid screaming
steals my breath away
somethings in the meadow
its sanity is gone
I catch a glimpse of it
form the corner of my eyes
it looks straight at me
oh please God no
I bolt through the forest
limbs sting my face
thorns tear my flesh
adreneline flows
I hear one in front of me
then I hear another
I think I am surrounded
let this be a dream
I've lost my grip on sanity
this cannot be real
I know their in a pack
as I hear a dozen scream
I'm running out of breath
one hits me from the side
nearly knocks me down
I scream and stumble blindly
I bolt out of the forest
into the cottage clearing
I feel the breath of shadows
coming close behind me
I jump up on the porch
slam and bolt the door
tears stream down my face
I'm peeking out the window
I see nothing moving
the silence is disturbing
but at the forest line
I can see the breath of shadows
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sorry its kinda long but I hope you liked it
your friend , doug
Copyright ©
doug
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2004-03-24 21:58:53]
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Re: Breath of Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:06:39 PM AEST
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Doug, you did great. You had me holding my breath till I knew you were o.k. and I even realize it is just a poem. Scary stuff!! LOL
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Re: Breath of Shadows
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:08:30 PM AEST
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WOW!! This was excellent!! I was at the edge of my chair from beginning to end.... Great piece of work here....
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Re: Breath of Shadows
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:23:03 PM AEST
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~:*e x c e l l e n t*:~ hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Breath of Shadows
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:20:45 PM AEST
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Awesome... loved it
very scary but great write
I enjoy scary stuff lol..
{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Breath of Shadows
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by SkYYBLu on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:24:58 PM AEST
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"this and nothing more"...
this poem reminds me of something that poe would write...like from the raven...great job I was rivited!
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Re: Breath of Shadows
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by arden on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:43:02 PM AEST
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creepy and awesome! this was great. i loved it well done keep it up.
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