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Lost within your splendour's shadow.
Crystalline tears of hushed lust cease the flow of blood.
Across my pale-white wrists.
Leaving scars and rifts within a crumbled past.
Never lost, never fading.
I dwell within.
I am but an image of the valour you create.
Never knowing my defeat.
You tarry on in innocence.
Darkening hope so fragile and sublime.
Hope, more precious than the rarest jewels.
More pure than the finest pearls.
Which once dwelt in the calm and soothing waters.
The wellsprings of life and the lush, spring meadows.
Now dwelleth in the barren feilds of dust you leave behind.
Dwelling in your victory I find myself alone.
Mourning what will never come.
Longing to be relevent in your life so valiant.
I am nothing.
Nothing but reflections of forgotten love. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SkYYBLu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Dust

Contributed by SkYYBLu on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:41:09 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You left me in your dust.
Lost within your splendour's shadow.
Crystalline tears of hushed lust cease the flow of blood.
Across my pale-white wrists.
Leaving scars and rifts within a crumbled past.
Never lost, never fading.
I dwell within.
I am but an image of the valour you create.
Never knowing my defeat.
You tarry on in innocence.
Darkening hope so fragile and sublime.
Hope, more precious than the rarest jewels.
More pure than the finest pearls.
Which once dwelt in the calm and soothing waters.
The wellsprings of life and the lush, spring meadows.
Now dwelleth in the barren feilds of dust you leave behind.
Dwelling in your victory I find myself alone.
Mourning what will never come.
Longing to be relevent in your life so valiant.
I am nothing.
Nothing but reflections of forgotten love.

Copyright © SkYYBLu ... [ 2004-03-23 16:41:09]
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Re: Dust (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:43:54 PM AEST
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oh wow... this is gorgeous, stop-skipped my heartstrings! beautiful write. ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Dust (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:01:11 PM AEST
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Im amazed that you dont have more post's then you do.. i thurly enjoyed your write.. rips your heart out and make you realize whats going on.. i hope you overcome what source of light you dont have in your soul..
keep up the great work
~neglected1~

Re: Dust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 11:41:53 AM AEST
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heart wrenching, emotive expressions, stunning imagery and comparisons.
Crestfallen, delicate, whisps, gentle-still within the discomfort of your emotions.

i loved it.

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