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[aid] => mick
[title] => Peace Over War
[time] => 2004-03-21 10:19:49
[hometext] => Based on someting a sensei ended a karate class with
[bodytext] =>
Right closed fist means war.
Left open hand means peace.
We always strive to put peace over war.
Right clenched fist.
Oil-fueled blood lust.
Poor men fighting for the rich.
A new empire beckons.
Left open hand;
stop, wait, think.
Question the "knowledge".
Corporate-processed for
the protection of the powerful.
I've chosen my path.
Closed hands hide things.
WMD's that can be debunked
with WMI's.
I choose to tread the path of peace.
Peace is pre-emptive.
Eliminate the fuel
and you quench the flame.
Stand like the heroes did.
Fear in the hearts,
fire in their bellies.
We're on a roll now,
but need to keep on.
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 2820
[topic] => 41
[informant] => Dralion
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => political
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Peace Over War
Contributed by
Dralion
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:19:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
political
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Right closed fist means war.
Left open hand means peace.
We always strive to put peace over war.
Right clenched fist.
Oil-fueled blood lust.
Poor men fighting for the rich.
A new empire beckons.
Left open hand;
stop, wait, think.
Question the "knowledge".
Corporate-processed for
the protection of the powerful.
I've chosen my path.
Closed hands hide things.
WMD's that can be debunked
with WMI's.
I choose to tread the path of peace.
Peace is pre-emptive.
Eliminate the fuel
and you quench the flame.
Stand like the heroes did.
Fear in the hearts,
fire in their bellies.
We're on a roll now,
but need to keep on.
Copyright ©
Dralion
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2004-03-21 10:19:49]
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Re: Peace Over War
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:38:05 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO!BRAVO! Dalion, what a spectacular write! Takes courage to take a stand......I with you on this hand.....I want peace at any cost....too many young boys lives we have lost!
Takes more courage to stop and turn around, that to start it in the beginning whether grounds or not!
Welcome aboard Dalion......we are so glad you can be with us here. We are mostly very loving poets....who would help you before you even know us.....keep placing your comments so that others will notice.....soon you'll be on a roll.......your poems will soar....along with us!
lovingcritters
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Re: Peace Over War
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 08:28:28 PM AEST
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I wish the entire world would stand with open left hands. We are destroying ourselves and our world. What do future generations have to look forward too? This is an excellent write and I would like to take this opportunity to welcome you to YPDC. I will look forward to more of your writes.
Rita |
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Re: Peace Over War
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:20:15 AM AEST
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Why is the left hand associated with the evil side..? You show we all should open our left hands! Very good poem.
Hur |
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Re: Peace Over War
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by Coaster on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:57:52 PM AEST
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I love it and I'm totally with you as far as our oppinons go. Peace is the best way to go. You have some talent.
Ryan |
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Re: Peace Over War
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by MOTOXRCR on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:34:25 AM AEST
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| Got your comment, decided to come over and take a read... Excellent piece of writing, and i also looked at your site, glad to see someone is trying... One day everyone will understand... One day when it's at their front door |
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Re: Peace Over War
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by being_oflight on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:04:50 PM AEST
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| thats exacly how i feel..i like it alot..good job |
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Re: Peace Over War
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by Where_To on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 08:26:03 PM AEST
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o i get it
if someone is going to punch me i can just hold out my left hand and say stop and they will change their mind and not want to kick the crap out of me |
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Re: Peace Over War
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by Where_To on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 08:27:46 PM AEST
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| oh and even if i dont agree it still is a very good poem |
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Re: Peace Over War
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by Bbear61 on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 05:16:06 PM AEST
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Interesting, a new way to see things.
Thank you for the great read. |
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Re: Peace Over War
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 07:58:46 PM AEST
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great use of the hands image. it brought out a lot of meaning just from that
ultimately and ironically, we're fighting for peace, at least that's what we think
i personally don't favor that disgusting word "war"
great job on this
take care
-K.Z. |
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