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Array ( [sid] => 39489 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Petulant Rantings [time] => 2004-03-20 15:24:00 [hometext] => I am a petulant child... well a petulant man....so I rant...and rave when I don't get what I want...but what's the point...we will all die anyway..so whats the use..if anything I am a fool. [bodytext] => The world has seen it fit
to deny me my dreams
witholding its merits
and glorious acclaims

so I see no fault
in my petulant chimes
to withold my efforts
and curtailing my time

no more will I give
my efforts to matters
no more will I live
in service to others

come to think of it
I would probably lose
for the world's credit
lies not in single cues

someone would come along
to replace my vacant seat
my place in the throngs
is certainly not unique

but whatever I have to offer
the world shall never reap
if I am made to suffer
than the world shall also weep

this oath that I have made
I plan to really keep
the world better fades
without anything of mine to need. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Petulant Rantings

Contributed by Baronhawk on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:24:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The world has seen it fit
to deny me my dreams
witholding its merits
and glorious acclaims

so I see no fault
in my petulant chimes
to withold my efforts
and curtailing my time

no more will I give
my efforts to matters
no more will I live
in service to others

come to think of it
I would probably lose
for the world's credit
lies not in single cues

someone would come along
to replace my vacant seat
my place in the throngs
is certainly not unique

but whatever I have to offer
the world shall never reap
if I am made to suffer
than the world shall also weep

this oath that I have made
I plan to really keep
the world better fades
without anything of mine to need.

Copyright © Baronhawk ... [ 2004-03-20 15:24:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Petulant Rantings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:03:53 PM AEST
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Go to your room, young man, and don't come out until you can behave!! Shame shame on you. But don't we all feel this way sometimes. I am a pouter too, always have been. You are right though, it doesn't accomplish a thing. This is funny. I hope you meant it to be.

Rita

Re: Petulant Rantings (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:11:38 PM AEST
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The battle of emotion and intellectual reasoning? Hmmm, you are a complex one. Well we all pout at times and rant, poetry can be the perfect outlet for it. I liked this one alot. Kie

Re: Petulant Rantings (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:16:19 PM AEST
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an intriguing piece...well written i might add...rant on...life's not always as it may appear...

faith

Re: Petulant Rantings (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:59:25 PM AEST
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My mind runs in the same direction
Why put all the wasted energy in to something so foolish? Not me....I'm too practical! And then on the other hand very stubborn indeed! I'd never give them or whomever the satisfaction..........and let them change me.........No never may that happen. They are then controlling me......I like being free too much.
But I never forget that those that love and keep on loving have much to conribute...so no matter what happens.....I demand, yes
demand of myself that I shall never.....no NEVER stop loving me........for without that love how can I love thee?
consue
You must love yourself first and can't keep love unless it is given away! Hard bargain at times........but is never wrong. I've tested it for many year! it's flawless!

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