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Array ( [sid] => 39310 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hold Me Close [time] => 2004-03-19 10:06:26 [hometext] => All my suicide poems are about love, i wonder why? [bodytext] => I never want you to let go,
Hold me close to your heart,
Where ever you go I will follow,

The time came when you had to leave,
Gave me one last kiss goodbye,
Left me on the doorstep to grieve,

Now here I lay,
Apon the floor,
My restles soul cannot stay,

You shall hear my voice,
While reading this,
This is my final choice,

Life no longer seem a pleasure,
My worthless body left stone cold,
Never will i become warmer,

No more of your caressing touch,
I don't care for nothing no more,
Thrusting in deep the knife i clutch,

I'm sorry for putting you through pain,
Don't try to save me I'm already gone,
From my still body you must restrain,

Here I stay deep in eternity,
Of black darkness my new home,
No one agin to see my face so sulky,

Don't join me here now,
Go on keep loveing,
You will manage I know somehow,

This was just an answer,
At each sight of me,
People looked away in horror,

Don't you follow in my path,
I wont let you die with me,
Never to go on and continue wrath,

Now you hold me close to your heart,
When nothing can take me back,
Forever we shall be apart.
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Hold Me Close

Contributed by TwEeK on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:06:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I never want you to let go,
Hold me close to your heart,
Where ever you go I will follow,

The time came when you had to leave,
Gave me one last kiss goodbye,
Left me on the doorstep to grieve,

Now here I lay,
Apon the floor,
My restles soul cannot stay,

You shall hear my voice,
While reading this,
This is my final choice,

Life no longer seem a pleasure,
My worthless body left stone cold,
Never will i become warmer,

No more of your caressing touch,
I don't care for nothing no more,
Thrusting in deep the knife i clutch,

I'm sorry for putting you through pain,
Don't try to save me I'm already gone,
From my still body you must restrain,

Here I stay deep in eternity,
Of black darkness my new home,
No one agin to see my face so sulky,

Don't join me here now,
Go on keep loveing,
You will manage I know somehow,

This was just an answer,
At each sight of me,
People looked away in horror,

Don't you follow in my path,
I wont let you die with me,
Never to go on and continue wrath,

Now you hold me close to your heart,
When nothing can take me back,
Forever we shall be apart.

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-03-19 10:06:26]
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Re: Hold Me Close (User Rating: 1 )
by gothicangel on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:49:17 AM AEST
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Hi there!
I liked your poem, I can see myself in that poem.. But remember.. there is alot of fishes in the sea ;) you will find someone!

Re: Hold Me Close (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:40:50 PM AEST
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beautiful yet sad all wrapped into one
michelle

Re: Hold Me Close (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 09:55:48 PM AEST
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Great poem. I felt this way the other day... ofr a few days actually... keep it up & keep looking for that special someone!

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