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[aid] => mick
[title] => A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
[time] => 2004-03-14 23:51:43
[hometext] => I created this poem for a lovely lady named ladyfawn, whom has shed enough tears for a lifetime!
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"A DAY WITHOUT TEARS!"
Early morning dew to refresh her soul.
A beautiful ladyfawn deer takes a stroll.
Pink sunrise, delightful against
Blue Mountain.
Exquisite delight in serenity, peaceful beacon
" A Day Without Tears!"
Gentle water near, peaceful, n'er a ripple......
An early rising bird glides gingerly
like the Eagle.
Trout, rainbow and brookies sound asleep.
Huge mountain pine restful fine,
no longer weep.
"A Day Without Tears!"
Her past can be seen in the mirrored pond.
Drinking there, only when thirsty, past beyond
Shed tears of yesterday, could fill this lake.
Others she'll not awaken, lovingly
for their sake.
"A Day Without Tears!"
She stands now to listen, a voice she did hear?
"I've saved all of your tears, I was there
each and every year...
Courageous little deer, your heart not hardened....
Losses so grave, yet love stayed, you
endured, you were sweetened!"
"A Day Without Tears!"
Not camoflauged and hidden 'neath tree's leaves
This dear fawn, chose bravery, faith believes.
Forgetting herself, her grief, tremendous sorrow.
Never allowing her tears to rob her of tomorrow
"A Day With Tears is followed with
a Rainbow!"
A lasting example for us, you have set.
Loving poems you write, beautiful asset!
We at YPDC admire you, and love you too!
Wishes granted and guaranteed, ours for you
"A Day Without Tears," you're due......
"Created especially for you Nessa
written with much compassion
flowing from my pen."
ConSue
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 14, 2004
This is you Nessa......
"You cannot always have happiness,
but you can always give happiness."
~Author unknown~
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A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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lovingcritters
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:51:43 PM in AEST
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"A DAY WITHOUT TEARS!"
Early morning dew to refresh her soul.
A beautiful ladyfawn deer takes a stroll.
Pink sunrise, delightful against
Blue Mountain.
Exquisite delight in serenity, peaceful beacon
" A Day Without Tears!"
Gentle water near, peaceful, n'er a ripple......
An early rising bird glides gingerly
like the Eagle.
Trout, rainbow and brookies sound asleep.
Huge mountain pine restful fine,
no longer weep.
"A Day Without Tears!"
Her past can be seen in the mirrored pond.
Drinking there, only when thirsty, past beyond
Shed tears of yesterday, could fill this lake.
Others she'll not awaken, lovingly
for their sake.
"A Day Without Tears!"
She stands now to listen, a voice she did hear?
"I've saved all of your tears, I was there
each and every year...
Courageous little deer, your heart not hardened....
Losses so grave, yet love stayed, you
endured, you were sweetened!"
"A Day Without Tears!"
Not camoflauged and hidden 'neath tree's leaves
This dear fawn, chose bravery, faith believes.
Forgetting herself, her grief, tremendous sorrow.
Never allowing her tears to rob her of tomorrow
"A Day With Tears is followed with
a Rainbow!"
A lasting example for us, you have set.
Loving poems you write, beautiful asset!
We at YPDC admire you, and love you too!
Wishes granted and guaranteed, ours for you
"A Day Without Tears," you're due......
"Created especially for you Nessa
written with much compassion
flowing from my pen."
ConSue
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 14, 2004
This is you Nessa......
"You cannot always have happiness,
but you can always give happiness."
~Author unknown~
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:55:57 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem written for a beautiful person. I agree with every word.
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:00:34 AM AEST
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Nessa, this is you. Even the short time I have been here I notice the kindness and love and gentleness and caring you give to everyone. It is truly noticed and appreciated, sweet lady.
Connie, you got her perfectly. Great work.
Hugs
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:03:27 AM AEST
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Awwwww Connie.... this is a perfect tribute to Nessa.... You are such a sweetheart!!! I'm sure Ness will treasure it always.. Great pic also....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by Angelic_Demon on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:07:36 AM AEST
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Every single word is extremely truthful. I should know-- I have to live with the woman.
*laughs* This is very beautiful, Connie. You're very sweet for writing it. Mom is gonna flip-- when she sees it. *devilish grin* She'll just have to happen upon it herself. When I hear the shriek from the other room I'll know she found it. ;P
Hugs, and it really is beautiful,
Mars |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:13:15 AM AEST
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Hi adopted mom,
this is jus heavenly and we all find strength in Nessa.
You've written a master peice for our friend.
this will probably make her cry but it will be a good cry.
Luv the picture and it suits her so well.
We all luv u Nessa.
U too mom.
luv, huggs, no tears today,
emy |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:18:29 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem written by and written for a beautiful soul that lives upon this earth... I haven't been here long but I can tell u both have sweet beautiful souls!!! Thank u both so much for sharing ur words... not only this poem but all that u write... and ur wonderful comments that u make about other's poems as well.
~Donna~
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:36:24 AM AEST
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~:*wow and wow*:~
.....you have moved me beyond words, i feel so loved, thank you for this poem from my deepest heart connie, im keeping it forever, you are a dear precious friend, ......i am furthermore speechless except to say these tears i shed are happy ones, im honored, i really really love this poem:) love my ypdc family, love you, nessa xxx... |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:57:29 AM AEST
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WOW THAT IS A VERY TOUCHING POEM.
VERY GOOD JOB YOU DESERVE A 5. |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by shelby on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:43:49 AM AEST
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a woman with a heart of gold wrote this for another woman with a heart of gold.How blessed we are to have both of you to touch us as you do.
When someone dear is removed from us they are replaced with another for we are never alone. Though it may be from a distance there is love solid felt and true.
Michelle |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by shelby on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:44:15 AM AEST
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a woman with a heart of gold wrote this for another woman with a heart of gold.How blessed we are to have both of you to touch us as you do.
When someone dear is removed from us they are replaced with another for we are never alone. Though it may be from a distance there is love solid felt and true.
Michelle |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by venkat on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:28:46 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem for a beautiful lady..
Best wishes to both of you.. venkat |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 05:17:28 AM AEST
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Touching beyond compare. I could write a thousand words, but the beauty and purity of the poem speaks for itself..
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by Pompous on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 07:24:39 AM AEST
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| such a beautiful poem ladyfawn certainly needs a day without tears, (im only guessing from all those amazing poems she's written) and of course as much credit should go to you lovingcritters for your display of both brilliant talent and a simple love for a dear friend |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 07:41:06 AM AEST
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A beautiful tribute to a lady so deserving ... "a day without tears" ... may she have a lifetime without tears ... a remarkable woman.
hugs Jan |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by Kie on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 10:23:56 AM AEST
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| This poem really touched my heart. Nessa is a wonderful person and your poem was incredible. There is something very moving when another person takes the time to write a poem especially for you. Its one of those unforgettable moments. You did an excellent job composing this one. You are the best ConSue. Kie |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by AliB on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 10:31:51 AM AEST
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Wow!!! What can I say but agree with everybody else? You have captured Nessa's very being in this poem, she is one very special lady and I'll always be grateful for her kind and loving words to me. She is an inspiration to us all. Fantastic poem for a fantastic lady, well done. I give it a 5
Ali xx |
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Re: A DAY WITHOUT TEARS
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by norm on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:31:36 PM AEST
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I am only a man..what do I know of emotions
The writer and the writee deserve the best
In this instance they have both given it... |
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