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Array ( [sid] => 38644 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Gone Bad [time] => 2004-03-14 21:20:07 [hometext] => It's sad, hopefully heart-touching, and i think a good write. About a woman who was beaten and finally her boyfriend went too far and killed her.If you are going through this GET HELP! [bodytext] => I Love You is what you said.
I just stared you busted open my head!
My throat is slit my breaths are short.
If I live through this your going to court!
How can you love me, but hurt me this way?
Now I just pray, that I don’t die today.
I cannot see, for my eyes are swollen shut.
I don’t think I could count, how many times I’ve been cut.
Nothing could amount to how much pain I’m in.
Don’t you realize this is a sin?
I should have left you, right after the first slap.
You would pull out my hair so I started wearing a cap.
Hopefully no one had to go through as much pain as me.
I wish you would go away, please just let me be!
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Love Gone Bad

Contributed by perfection on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:20:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I Love You is what you said.
I just stared you busted open my head!
My throat is slit my breaths are short.
If I live through this your going to court!
How can you love me, but hurt me this way?
Now I just pray, that I don’t die today.
I cannot see, for my eyes are swollen shut.
I don’t think I could count, how many times I’ve been cut.
Nothing could amount to how much pain I’m in.
Don’t you realize this is a sin?
I should have left you, right after the first slap.
You would pull out my hair so I started wearing a cap.
Hopefully no one had to go through as much pain as me.
I wish you would go away, please just let me be!

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Re: Love Gone Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by rhymeandreason on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:23:51 PM AEST
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Good work about a painful subject. Like you said, should have left after the first slap.
putting words to what you feel is what it is all about. keep 'em coming
rhyme and reason

Re: Love Gone Bad (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:40:11 AM AEST
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AYO BABYGIRL I HOPE U R OK YOUR POEM WAS DEEP BUT STRAIGHT TO THE POINT
IM SORRY U HAD TO GO THROUGH SUCH PAIN FO'SHO. I DONT HIT FEMALES SO I DONT KNOW MUCH ABOUT WHAT YOUR GOIN THROUGH BUT I'VE GOT ALOT OF FEMALE FRIENDS DAT HAVE BUT I JUST GOT OUT OF JAIL FOR BREAKIN' MY X GIRLFRIENDS BOYFRIENDS JAW 4 BEATIN' ON HER SO YEA IM AGAINST DAT BULL*****
U MAY LOVE HIM BUT IF HE FEELS DA NEED TO HIT U WHEN HE GETS MAD YOU'LL BE BETTER OFF BY YOURSELF
IF U LIVE IN VA YOU COULD CALL ME IF U HAVE ANY FURTHER PROBLEMS AT 757-488-7974 AND ASK 4 MIKE. TAKE CARE BE STRONG AND KEEP YOUR HEAD UP .

Re: Love Gone Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:45:05 PM AEST
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Such a sad write but ppl need to be made aware of such a horrible thing, when it isnt happening to you it is too easy to turn your head. I know someone that is in an abusive relationship. When someone close to her recently told her that if she didnt leave him he would probably end up killing her AND her children, all she said was...Youre probably right. This is so sad and I am so thankful that I have never had to go through what she went through. Thanks for sharing this poem and helping to make more ppl aware that this is still going on even in "today's" world

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