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It happened to a friend of a friend of mine
In a land far, far away
To make a long story short
You can’t have your cake and eat it too
Do as I say and not as I do
Life is an emotional roller coaster
You ain’t seen nothing yet
You snooze you lose
Your ship has sailed
You really need a wake-up call
To wake up and smell the coffee
You hang on my every word
I hate to say this but…
There is ice water in her veins
A journey of 1000 miles begins with one step
Don’t make a mountain out of a molehill
Don’t paint yourself into a corner
And remember, they all lived happily ever after
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It was a dark and stormy night

Contributed by lil_angel on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 04:04:29 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

It was a dark and stormy night
It happened to a friend of a friend of mine
In a land far, far away
To make a long story short
You can’t have your cake and eat it too
Do as I say and not as I do
Life is an emotional roller coaster
You ain’t seen nothing yet
You snooze you lose
Your ship has sailed
You really need a wake-up call
To wake up and smell the coffee
You hang on my every word
I hate to say this but…
There is ice water in her veins
A journey of 1000 miles begins with one step
Don’t make a mountain out of a molehill
Don’t paint yourself into a corner
And remember, they all lived happily ever after

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Re: It was a dark and stormy night (User Rating: 1 )
by srugglingyoungster on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 11:12:39 PM AEST
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Angel,
i see where this is going. great poem! i thinks it more like poetry than what its listed as. Ya know? but its true. good job and keep up the work. Hey, read some of my poems. please?
youngster.

Re: It was a dark and stormy night (User Rating: 1 )
by rhymeandreason on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:14:07 PM AEST
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Nice free-style stream of consciousness play on tired over used platitudes and aphorisms. I can tell that:;You don't take any wooden nickles or count your chickens before they hatch. Not to mention your nobodies fool , and keep both feet on the ground. Hats off to you,keep up the good work, don't give up the ship and remember to brush after every meal!See ya later alligator. After while crocadile. Real soon racoon. etc.
etc.

Re: It was a dark and stormy night (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:40:26 AM AEST
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Very good!
Keep thinking.
luv, huggs,
emy
thanks for your comments on my work.

Re: It was a dark and stormy night (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:43:58 PM AEST
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This is good. I liked it. *S* Cynthia

Re: It was a dark and stormy night (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:43:53 AM AEST
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Ahh life is a rollercoaster....well done.

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