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Array ( [sid] => 38393 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Light You LikeFireworks! [time] => 2004-03-12 18:30:32 [hometext] => Yeah... It's REALLY dark and wrong, so if you don't like gore, blood, twistedness, or anything remotely related, I highly suggest you don't read this!!! [bodytext] => Hello little humans!
Why do you shrink away,
when I come to play?
I rise into the sky,
on black wings so silky,
and spot my next playmate.
I corner you and play tricks with your mind,
My body hides a disturbed soul,
as I think of what game to play.
I know just what to do!
We go to a special place,
were the game begins.
I light your hair on fire,
I watch you burn,
waiting for it to reach the TNT
strapped to you feet.
I hear your screams,
I laugh and dance and frolic
as you burn like a fuse.
KABOOM!
Hahahahaha!!!!!
I watch you fly up in the sky,
like a giant display of fireworks,
most of them spraying red.
I twirl as the pieces of your body
rain down. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 13 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

I Light You LikeFireworks!

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 06:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hello little humans!
Why do you shrink away,
when I come to play?
I rise into the sky,
on black wings so silky,
and spot my next playmate.
I corner you and play tricks with your mind,
My body hides a disturbed soul,
as I think of what game to play.
I know just what to do!
We go to a special place,
were the game begins.
I light your hair on fire,
I watch you burn,
waiting for it to reach the TNT
strapped to you feet.
I hear your screams,
I laugh and dance and frolic
as you burn like a fuse.
KABOOM!
Hahahahaha!!!!!
I watch you fly up in the sky,
like a giant display of fireworks,
most of them spraying red.
I twirl as the pieces of your body
rain down.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-03-12 18:30:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Light You LikeFireworks! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 07:41:35 PM AEST
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Good flowing write, liked it from the start to the end.
Not quite gory enough, but the imagary is there all the same.
Keep it up I like your style.

Re: I Light You LikeFireworks! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 08:42:35 PM AEST
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terrific write loved it.. I've read it three times already lol ...keep up the wonderful work..Love AnGel

Re: I Light You LikeFireworks! (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:29:47 PM AEST
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AYECARUMBA!
thats gory aint it eh?
not a dark poem more like a psycotic poem.
Good wright all the same though, kinda funny in a way? :o)

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