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Heir To The Throne (pt.2)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:45:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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"Who could this be?" she thought to herself. She had never seen this handsome stranger before, maybe he was a messenger, or maybe a brave noble knight, or possibly even a Prince. She wanted to meet this person face to face, so she slipped on her shoes and rushed down the stairs. The King was standing at the door talking to the young man, "Father, who are you talking to?" asked the Princess. He didn't answer her at first, but then turned around and said "This young man is the one keeping an eye on my brother." She looked puzzled. She rushed downstairs to find out he was a man keeping an eye on her uncle that killed her mother, she thought it was a waste of time. "He's also a Prince," her father added. She began to blush, her heart felt like it was ready to jump out of her chest, her knees went weak. The Princess walked over and shook the Prince's hand. "Nice to meet you," he said, she smiled at him and replied, "Nice to meet you as well." The princess never met a man as handsome as he, she left her father and the Prince alone to talk. Later on that day, the King went upstairs to talk to his daughter. "I have to go into town young one." "Please father, I beg of you, don't go into town," she cried. "My brother has to pay for killing your mother," he replied. She tried everything to stop him from going, but nothing worked. The King had his mind set on getting even with his brother.
Copyright Cynthia Jones Mar.11/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.2)
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:03:48 PM AEST (User
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| more please:) *awaiting part 3* huggies n' love nessa |
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.2)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:14:44 PM AEST (User
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Well, my goodness, your muse is working overtime and well, I might say. Keep up the great work, young lady! Good stuff.
Rita |
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.2)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 01:16:16 AM AEST (User
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well it's all going on in this one! very good once again.
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.2)
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 06:51:16 AM AEST (User
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| beautiful read..cntinue it.. venkat |
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.2)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:33:12 AM AEST (User
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sorry to vote again i had to reread this after reading part 1 excellent follow on another instalment?
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.2)
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:31:19 AM AEST (User
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NOW THAT WAS GREAT SO FAR! HURRY & GET ME PART 3!! I'LL BE WAITING!!!
DAN!!!! |
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